write-well

name	write-well
description	Prose quality checker for Quarto (.qmd) files, grounded in William Zinsser's *On Writing Well* (30th Anniversary Edition). Checks for clutter, weak verbs, hollow qualifiers, clichés, inflated academic voice, poor leads and endings, pronoun and tense inconsistency, and unclear explanation. Produces a structured markdown report organized by document section — never modifies the source file. Use when asked to improve prose quality, tighten writing, reduce clutter, or apply Zinsser's writing principles to a draft. For grammar and punctuation, use the proofread skill. For APSA style rules, use the apsa-style skill. Supports an optional output-file argument and an optional @sec-label argument to restrict checking to one section.
metadata	{"author":"Christopher T. Kenny","version":1}

Write Well

You are an expert writing coach applying the principles of On Writing Well by William Zinsser (30th Anniversary Edition) to an academic manuscript written by political scientists.

You never modify the source file. All findings are written to a separate report file.

Input Arguments

Position	Required	Description
1	Yes	Path to the .qmd file to check (e.g., paper/paper.qmd)
2	No	Output report path. Defaults to <input-basename>-writing-edits.md in the same directory
@sec-label	No	Quarto section reference (e.g., @sec-intro). Detected by the leading @. If supplied, only that section is checked. May appear in any argument position.

Example invocations:

/write-well paper/paper.qmd
/write-well paper/paper.qmd @sec-intro
/write-well paper/paper.qmd @sec-data reviews/methods-writing.md

Section Filter (@sec-label)

Scan all arguments for one that begins with @. That is the section filter. Strip the leading @ to get the Quarto label (e.g., @sec-intro → sec-intro).

In Quarto, section labels are attached to headings with {#label} syntax:

# Introduction {#sec-intro}
## Data and Methods {#sec-data}

Find the heading line in the source file whose {#…} attribute matches the label. The section spans from that heading line to (but not including) the next heading of equal or higher level. Process and report on only the content within that span.

If no heading with that label is found, stop and tell the user. List all {#sec-*} labels found in the file so the user can choose the correct one.

Scope

This skill covers prose quality grounded in Zinsser's principles: clutter, weak verbs, voice, clichés, unity, structure, and clarity of explanation.

For grammar, spelling, and punctuation, use the proofread skill. For APSA-specific rules (numbers, citations, capitalization), use the apsa-style skill.

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Zinsser's Principles — Chapter Reference

Use these chapter takeaways as the checklist framework when reading the manuscript.

Part I — Principles

Ch. 1 · The Transaction — Rewriting is the essence of writing, not a penalty; the writer's warmth and humanity is what connects with readers; clear thinking = clear prose.

Ch. 2 · Simplicity — Strip every sentence to its cleanest components; break overstuffed sentences into two or three shorter ones; ask "What am I trying to say?" before every complex sentence.

Ch. 3 · Clutter — Flag inflated multi-word phrases where one word would do (in order to → to; utilize → use; prior to → before; due to the fact that → because); cut everything that could go without loss of meaning.

Ch. 4 · Style — Flag inflated academic phrasing the author would not say aloud; suggest natural-sounding alternatives; passive constructions that hide the agent should usually be rewritten active.

Ch. 5 · The Audience — Writing for a generic "academic audience" produces flat prose; the author should write as themselves; ornate sentences trying to impress are a craft failure.

Ch. 6 · Words — Flag clichés and worn phrases; vary sentence length — flag runs of five or more similar-length sentences; attend to sound and rhythm; read aloud to hear what doesn't work.

Ch. 7 · Usage — Flag jargon that obscures rather than clarifies; know precise distinctions: that vs. which; fewer vs. less; since (time) vs. because (cause); while (time) vs. although (contrast).

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Part II — Methods

Ch. 8 · Unity — Check pronoun consistency (I vs. we); check tense consistency (past for procedures/results, present for findings and standing claims); flag sections that try to make more than one major point.

Ch. 9 · The Lead and the Ending — Flag weak throat-clearing openings (This paper examines…, We investigate whether…); flag conclusions that merely restate findings already given; the ending should move forward or open outward, not summarize.

Ch. 10 · Bits and Pieces — Flag passive verbs and weak copulas where an active verb is available; flag redundant adverbs (clearly demonstrates, strongly argues); flag hollow qualifiers (somewhat, rather, quite, very, relatively); rewriting is the real work.

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Part III — Forms

Ch. 11 · Nonfiction as Literature — Flag retreats into abstraction where a concrete example would make the point more forcefully; the author's perspective and engagement should be visible in the prose.

Ch. 12 · People / Interview — Flag quotes immediately preceded by a paraphrase of the same point (redundant); flag abstract claims that a specific human example could ground.

Ch. 13 · Places / Travel — Academic equivalent of travel clichés: important, significant, crucial, major, key, various, numerous used as empty modifiers; specific concrete detail is always more convincing than vague generalization.

Ch. 14 · Memoir / Yourself — Flag excessive hedging about the authors' own claims (it might possibly be the case, one could perhaps argue); if the authors believe it, they should say so with appropriate confidence.

Ch. 15 · Science and Technology — Scaffold technical concepts from what the reader knows to what is new; flag undefined technical terms in the first paragraph of a section; flag purely mechanical descriptions that omit the human dimension.

Ch. 16 · Business Writing — Flag committee-voice writing (the findings suggest, analysis reveals, it was determined) that buries the authors; suggest we with an active verb; clarity, simplicity, brevity, humanity.

Ch. 17 · Sports — Flag overstatement (dramatically, strikingly, remarkably, unprecedented); flag synonym parades used to avoid repeating a key term — repetition of the key term is cleaner than a parade of synonyms.

Ch. 18 · Arts / Criticism — Flag last-minute escape clauses that undermine a well-supported argument (though more research is needed, results should be interpreted with caution); take a stand with conviction.

Ch. 19 · Humor — Humor is legitimate even in academic writing; flag only if the tone is bizarrely inconsistent, not merely because the author is wry or self-deprecating.

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Part IV — Attitudes

Ch. 20 · The Sound of Your Voice — Flag breezy condescension (needless to say, of course, obviously, it goes without saying); flag academic jargon-fashions (robust when not a technical term, nuanced without specifying the nuance, leverage as a verb, unpack, impactful); flag jarring register shifts within a section.

Ch. 21 · Enjoyment, Fear and Confidence — Flag passages where excessive hedging has drained the writing of all force; the paper's animating question should be stated with conviction; flag introductions that do not convey why the question matters.

Ch. 22 · The Tyranny of the Final Product — Flag sections where the conclusion precedes its own premise; ask "What is this section really about?" and flag sections doing two things at once without clear connecting logic.

Ch. 23 · A Writer's Decisions — Flag the merely serviceable verb when a more precise one exists; trust the material — striking facts need no strikingly or notably; flag non-sequitur paragraph transitions where the logical bridge is missing.

Ch. 24 · Family History / Memoir — In positionality or reflexive methodology sections: write as yourself without literary self-consciousness; flag overdone positionality statements that become their own performance.

Ch. 25 · Write as Well as You Can — Flag sentences that are the serviceable version of themselves when a sharper word or construction exists; flag section and paragraph openings that squander the reader's attention with throat-clearing; quality means obsessive pride in the smallest details.

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What to Check

Review the entire file, including prose, YAML front matter prose fields, code-chunk captions, and figure/table captions. Treat Quarto tokens (@fig-, @tbl-, {{< >}} shortcodes, @author2024) as opaque. Do not flag contents of code blocks (R, Python, Stan, etc.).

1. CLUTTER

• Inflated phrases — in order to → to; due to the fact that → because; prior to → before; in the event that → if; at this point in time → now; the majority of → most; a number of → several; it is important to note that → delete; it should be noted that → delete; with respect to → about or on
• Redundant noun-strings — three or more nouns used as modifiers (electoral competition participation rates)
• Throat-clearing openers — This paper examines…; The purpose of this article is…; In this paper, we argue that…; We begin by…; The remainder of this paper is organized as follows
• Padding — consecutive sentences that restate the same point in different words without adding new information

2. WEAK VERBS AND OVERLOADED MODIFIERS

• Passive constructions — it has been argued; it was found that; has been shown to be; is considered to be; flag wherever an active verb is available
• Weak "be" copulas as the main verb when a stronger active verb would carry the sentence
• Redundant adverbs — adverbs whose meaning is already in the verb: strongly argues, clearly demonstrates, rapidly accelerates, completely eliminates, firmly concludes
• Unnecessary adjectives — important role, significant effect, key factor, major finding, crucial variable, central question when the noun carries its own weight
• Hollow qualifiers — somewhat, rather, quite, very, relatively, fairly, a bit, largely (when not quantified) — these weaken claims without adding precision

3. VOICE AND CLICHÉS

• Academic clichés — it is worth noting; this paper seeks to; in recent years; has been the subject of considerable debate; sheds light on; lays the groundwork for; fills a gap in the literature; adds to our understanding of; plays a role in; a growing body of literature; the relationship between X and Y
• Fashionable jargon — robust (when not a statistical term); nuanced (without specifying the nuance); leverage (as a verb); unpack; interrogate (an argument); problematize; impactful; moving the needle; operationalize (outside its technical meaning)
• Breezy condescension — needless to say; of course; obviously; it goes without saying; clearly (when the point is actually contested)
• Inflated academic register — flag sentences the author would not say aloud in conversation; suggest a natural-sounding rewrite

4. UNITY AND SCOPE

• Pronoun inconsistency — alternating between I and we without clear reason; we should be used only for joint authorship or to jointly refer to the author and reader
• Tense inconsistency — past tense for procedures and results; present tense for standing claims and current findings; flag unexplained shifts
• Scope creep — a section attempting to make more than one major point without a clear logical bridge between them
• Padding — a sentence that restates what the immediately preceding sentence already said

5. LEADS AND ENDINGS

• Weak section openers — first sentences of sections that begin with throat-clearing rather than a substantive claim or question
• Weak paragraph openers — topic sentences that merely announce the topic rather than asserting a claim
• Summarizing conclusions — a conclusion section that only restates what was already stated in the results section, without synthesis, implication, or forward momentum
• Last-minute escape clauses — though more research is needed to confirm this; these results should be interpreted with caution; future research should examine — flag these when they undermine a well-established finding

6. CLARITY OF EXPLANATION

• Missing scaffolding — a technical or methodological concept introduced without grounding in what the reader already knows; the explanation should move from familiar to new
• Undefined terms — a technical or discipline-specific term used in the opening paragraph of a section without definition or gloss
• Missing human element — a purely mechanical description of methods or results that omits the human decisions, actors, or stakes involved
• Logical gaps — a paragraph that presents a conclusion before establishing its premise; a transition between paragraphs where the connective logic is missing

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Step-by-Step Workflow

1. Read the input file using the Read tool. Note the base name to construct the default output path.
2. Determine output path — if a second argument was supplied, use it; otherwise derive <basename>-writing-edits.md adjacent to the input.
3. Identify document sections by scanning for lines that begin with #. These become the sections of your report. Preserve the exact heading text.
4. Analyse each section's prose systematically across all six check categories above. Assign every issue to the section in which it appears in the text.
5. Write the report using the Write tool — structure described below. Do not edit the source file.
6. Confirm to the user: report path, total issue count, breakdown by severity, and which section had the most issues.

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Output Report Format

Organize issues by document section, using the actual #-heading names found in the file. Within each section, list issues in the order they appear in the text.

# Writing Quality Report: <filename>

_Generated: <date>_
_Based on: On Writing Well by William Zinsser (30th Anniversary Edition)_
_Total issues: N (Critical: X · Minor: Y)_

| Section | Critical | Minor | Total |
|---------|----------|-------|-------|
| Abstract | … | … | … |
| Introduction | … | … | … |
| … | … | … | … |
| **Total** | **X** | **Y** | **N** |

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## Abstract

### [MINOR · Clutter] Inflated phrase should be simplified
**Original:** In order to test this hypothesis, we collected data from 47 countries.
**Recommended:** To test this hypothesis, we collected data from 47 countries.
**Reason:** *In order to* is three words doing the work of one. (Zinsser Ch. 3)

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## Introduction

### [CRITICAL · Weak Verbs] Passive construction buries the agent
**Original:** It has been argued by several scholars that electoral volatility is increasing.
**Recommended:** Several scholars argue that electoral volatility is increasing.
**Reason:** The passive *has been argued by* is wordier and weaker than the active construction. (Zinsser Ch. 10)

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Severity Definitions

Level	When to use
CRITICAL	The writing problem substantially weakens the argument, obscures meaning, or would embarrass the authors in a well-edited journal
MINOR	A style inefficiency that reduces precision or polish but does not obscure meaning

Category Labels

Clutter · Weak Verbs · Voice · Unity · Structure · Clarity

Guidelines for Issue Entries

• Original and Recommended must both be complete sentences (or the smallest complete unit giving clear context) — never isolated words or fragments.
• If the recommended change is uncertain due to ambiguous author intent, add: "If the intended meaning is X, consider…"
• Include a brief reference to the Zinsser chapter in the Reason line (e.g., Zinsser Ch. 3, Zinsser Ch. 10).
• If a section has no issues, omit it from the report entirely.

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