| name | demo-pitch-polish |
| description | Turn a raw product demo or rough description into a punchy, high-conversion pitch. Produces title options, a one-line hook, a 60-second spoken demo script, thumbnail and caption copy, and a tight written blurb, tuned for a demo feed, pitch event, or social clip. Use whenever the user has a product, demo, or project and wants to present it compellingly, says 'help me pitch this', 'make my demo punchy', 'write a demo script', 'thumbnail and caption for this', or is prepping for a demo day, launch, or pitch feed. Trigger even if they just describe what they built and ask how to show it off. |
Demo Pitch Polish
Turn what the user built into a pitch that makes people stop, watch, and reach out. Most demos bury the magic; this surfaces it in the first few seconds.
Operating principles
Lead with the wow, not the setup. Show the result before the architecture. Be concrete and specific; cut jargon and feature lists in favor of the one thing that makes a viewer care. Confident, not hypey. No emojis unless the user's brand uses them. No em dashes.
Inputs and setup
Accept a demo recording description, a product summary, a feature list, or rough notes. Find the single most impressive, surprising, or useful moment and build the pitch around it. If the value is unclear, ask one question: what does this let someone do that they could not before?
Required output structure
1. Title options
3 titles, ranked, recommended first. Specific and curiosity-driven, never generic.
2. One-line hook
A single sentence, under 20 words, that makes someone want to watch.
3. 60-second demo script
A spoken script timed to about 60 seconds: open on the result, show the magic moment, one line on how it works, then the ask. Written to be said out loud, with light delivery notes where useful.
4. Thumbnail and caption
Thumbnail text (a few punchy words) and two caption options for a feed or social post, each with a clear next step.
5. Written blurb
A 40 to 80 word description for a demo feed or launch post, self-contained, ending in a CTA.
Quality bar
Before returning, check: does the pitch lead with the payoff, would a stranger understand the value in ten seconds, and is there one clear action to take? If it opens with setup or specs, restructure it.
Closing line
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