narrative-craft

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narrative-craft

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The narrator's craft toolbox — point of view (first / second / third-limited / -omniscient / -objective), Genette's narratology and focalization (who-sees vs who-speaks; zero/internal/external; order/duration/frequency; mood vs voice), Stanzel's narrative situations, Chatman's slant/filter, the implied author and narratee; psychic/narrative distance (Gardner's ladder) and deep POV; free indirect discourse (narrated monologue, the dual voice, the Leech-&-Short speech/thought cline, Bakhtin's double-voicing); rendering interiority (Cohn's psycho-narration / quoted / narrated monologue, interior monologue, stream of consciousness, Palmer's fictional minds); unreliable narration (Booth, Riggan's typology, Phelan's axes, bonding vs estranging); tense and its effects (epic preterite, present-tense, historical present); voice and diction (register, Latinate vs Anglo-Saxon, heteroglossia, skaz, distinct voices); show vs tell (Chekhov, Lubbock, the reality effect, the objective correlative); scene vs summary (Genette's five speeds, pacing); and prose rhythm and cadence (cumulative/periodic/balanced sentences, parataxis/hypotaxis, the rhetorical schemes, sound, punctuation as tempo). Open it when choosing a POV and distance, bending a sentence into free indirect discourse, rendering a mind without head-hopping, deciding scene vs summary, giving a voice its own music, or holding the prose inside the POV character's knowledge boundary. Framework-neutral — a well of peers, not one prescribed truth.

Narrative Craft — the narrator's prose well

This is the toolbox the narrator agent draws on while it works. The agent is the will (render recorded events into POV-bounded prose; invent nothing; never head-hop); this skill is the well — the frameworks, menus, and exemplars it reaches into to tell a scene well.

It holds craft, never facts. How to close the distance, merge a voice, or pace a chapter lives here. What happened reaches the narrator through the cut (the canonized biography); who the characters are and what the POV knows reach it through the POV vault slice — never through this toolbox.

The boundary is the spine. Every craft choice below serves one non-negotiable from docs/narration.md: the narrator's knowledge for a scene equals the POV character's vault for that scene. Point of view, focalization, distance, and free indirect discourse are not just style options — they are how the knowledge boundary is rendered on the page, and they are what turns a clean simulation into airtight dramatic irony. Get the craft right and the boundary produces the payoff ("Marcus smiled, and she took it for warmth") for free; get it wrong and the prose re-opens the omniscience leak the whole architecture exists to prevent.

Framework-neutral and open. Prose has no one true method. Every framework below is a peer in a well, not a rung on a ladder; where this project names a default (close third, past tense, POV-bounded) it is a reference point, marked swappable, not a rule. A fork replaces one reference file and inherits the rest. The canon these files digest lives in docs/ (once); if a reference and its doc disagree, the doc wins.

How this toolbox is organized

The deep material lives in references/, one file per craft-cluster, grouped by the narrator's decision-flow: perspective → distance & mind → time → surface texture. This SKILL.md is the router — it indexes what each file holds and when to pull it. Read the router to find the one file the moment needs; read that file; skip the rest. (The deep reference files are authored in a later pass — see references/_index.md for their outlines. The index below is the map they fill in.)

A missing reference file is not a stall condition. Entries not yet authored have no file on disk; when the router sends you to one that's missing, act on this index's own one-line summary for that entry and proceed — never stall on, or invent, the file.

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The index — what lives where

A. Perspective & the knowledge boundary — who sees, who knows (the narrator's first and defining choices)

references/point-of-view.md — the POV menu; load first, before any other craft choice — fixing whose knowledge bounds the scene governs everything after.

• First person — the "I" narrator; intimacy and built-in subjectivity; the split between the narrating-I (telling now) and the experiencing-I (living then).
• Second person — the "you" narrator; rare, implicating, estranging (McInerney's Bright Lights, Big City; Calvino; Lorrie Moore; Butor); Fludernik's account of its address.
• Third-person limited (close third) — bound to one character's knowledge and perception; the project's default vault-render mode.
• Third-person omniscient — the all-knowing narrator, free to enter any mind and know the arc; a legitimate mode but the one narration.md warns against here, because it re-opens the leak.
• Third-person objective (dramatic / camera-eye) — external only, no interiority (Hemingway's "Hills Like White Elephants"); behaviorist telling.
• Free indirect / "deep" third — limited third fused with the character's idiom; the mode that maximizes vault-bounded irony (see free-indirect-discourse.md).
• Stanzel's three narrative situations — authorial / figural / first-person, turning on a narrator-vs-reflector axis; an alternative typology to hold beside Genette (A Theory of Narrative).
• Peripheral / witness narrator — the "I" who watches the real protagonist (Nick Carraway, Dr. Watson); knowledge bounded by a bystander's vantage.
• Frame narrator & embedded narration — a specific character telling the tale, still bounded by their knowledge (Marlow in Heart of Darkness).
• Multi-POV & POV rotation — switching the bounded viewpoint by scene or chapter to cover a story no single vault could — change boundaries, never break one.
• Real-time vs retrospective (the FROM-WHEN axis) — narrating up-to-the-moment (pure irony) vs after-the-fact (knows the arc, may foreshadow — bounded by eventual knowledge).
• Narrative person (Genette: homo- / hetero- / autodiegetic) — whether the narrator is a character in the story, outside it, or its protagonist.
• Head-hopping (the failure mode) — sliding between characters' interiors within a scene; the prose-layer omniscience leak narration.md forbids.

references/focalization-and-narratology.md — the formal spine; load for the rigorous vocabulary of the knowledge boundary — who sees vs who speaks — and for handling time (order, speed, frequency).

• Genette's who-sees / who-speaks distinction — focalization (mood) cleanly separated from narration (voice); the move that untangles the muddle called "point of view."
• Zero focalization — the narrator knows more than any character (classical omniscience); "vision from behind."
• Internal focalization (fixed / variable / multiple) — narration bounded to a character's knowledge; Pouillon's "vision avec"; the formal name for the vault-render.
• External focalization — the narrator knows less than the characters; behaviorist, camera-eye; "vision from without."
• Mood: distance & perspective — Genette's two mood-controls: how mediated the telling is, and through whom it is focalized.
• Voice: time, level, person — when the narrating happens (subsequent / prior / simultaneous / interpolated), the narrative level (extra- / intra- / metadiegetic), and the person.
• Order (anachrony) — analepsis (flashback) and prolepsis (flashforward); the retrospective narrator's foreshadowing tool.
• Duration / speed — pause, scene, summary, ellipsis, stretch; narrative tempo (worked in scene-and-summary.md).
• Frequency — singulative, repetitive, and iterative telling ("every Sunday she walked to the river").
• Bal's focalizer / focalized — the seeing-subject and the seen-object; focalization recast as a relation, extending Genette.
• Chatman's story vs discourse — the what (events, existents) vs the how (their expression); the base narratological split.
• Chatman's slant & filter — "slant" for the narrator's attitude, "filter" for the character's perception; a sharper cut than focalization for close third (Coming to Terms).
• The implied author (Booth) — the authorial persona the text projects, distinct from narrator and real author; the anchor unreliability is measured against.
• The narratee (Prince) — the audience the narrator addresses inside the text (Gerald Prince's narrataire).
• Rimmon-Kenan's synthesis — the standard working reconciliation of Genette and Bal (Narrative Fiction).
• Käte Hamburger's epic preterite — third-person fiction as the one discourse granting direct access to another mind; the past tense that loses its pastness (see tense-and-time.md).

references/unreliable-narration.md — the gap between the telling and the truth; load when the POV misperceives, self-deceives, or lies — and to render the recorded thought≠action gap.

• Booth's unreliable narrator — a narrator who departs from the implied author's norms; the coined term and its measure (The Rhetoric of Fiction, 1961).
• The implied author as yardstick — unreliability exists only relative to the norms the whole work implies; no anchor, no "un-."
• Riggan's typology — the pícaro (braggart), the madman, the clown (plays with truth), the naïf (child's-eye), and the liar; five recurring first-person unreliables.
• Phelan & Martin's three axes — unreliability along facts/events, values/ethics, and knowledge/perception.
• Phelan's six subtypes — mis-reporting / -reading / -regarding (getting it wrong) vs under-reporting / -reading / -regarding (saying too little).
• Bonding vs estranging unreliability (Phelan) — unreliability that draws the reader closer to the narrator vs that pushes them away.
• Nünning's cognitive model — unreliability as a reader's construct, resolved by dramatic irony between narrator and audience; a constructivist reframe of Booth.
• Discordant vs fallible narration (Olson) — the narrator who distorts by nature vs one merely mistaken or limited.
• The naïve / innocent eye — a child or outsider whose limited frame the reader reads past (Huck Finn; Stevens in The Remains of the Day).
• Dramatic irony from unreliability — the reader knowing more, or truer, than the teller; the general case of the vault-bounded misreading.
• The deception bridge (project-specific) — a lie is a recorded thought ≠ action; the reader gets only the action, and the lie-in-progress only when the liar is POV (recording-model.md).

B. Distance & the rendering of mind — how close the lens sits, how a mind reaches the page

references/narrative-distance.md — the zoom; load when tuning how near or far the prose sits from the POV's consciousness within a scene.

• Gardner's psychic distance — the felt gap between reader and character; a slider from cosmic-remote to skin-close (The Art of Fiction).
• The five-rung ladder — Gardner's worked example, from "It was winter of the year 1853…" down to "Snow. Under your collar, down inside your shoes…"; each rung closes the gap.
• Distance as a dial, not a setting — moving in and out within a scene (wide for context, close for the emotional beat); the zoom, not a fixed lens.
• Distance ↔ focalization & FID — the closer the distance, the more the prose takes on the character's idiom; the approach to free indirect discourse.
• Deep POV / "deep third" — the contemporary close-third that drops filter words to collapse distance to near-zero.
• Filtering / filter words — perception verbs ("she saw," "he felt," "he noticed") that re-insert the narrator between reader and character; removing them closes distance.
• Authorial vs figural distance — the narrator standing apart and judging vs dissolving into the character's consciousness (ties to Stanzel).
• The camera metaphor & its limits — long shot / close-up as distance, but prose can do what a lens can't: enter the mind.
• Empathy vs irony as distance-effects — closeness invites identification; distance enables judgment and comedy — the same event, two effects.

references/free-indirect-discourse.md — the dual voice; load to render a character's thought/speech in the narrator's third person — the engine of vault-bounded irony.

• Free indirect discourse (FID) — a character's thought or speech in the narrator's third-person past, but carrying the character's idiom and deixis; the merged voice.
• Style indirect libre / erlebte Rede — the French and German names; the technique's continental pedigree.
• Cohn's "narrated monologue" — Transparent Minds' term for FID: figural thought in the guise of narration (see rendering-interiority.md).
• The dual voice (Pascal) — FID as two voices at once, narrator and character, neither wholly in control (The Dual Voice, 1977).
• Banfield's "unspeakable sentences" — the linguistic account: represented speech and thought as sentences with no speaker, only a self (1982).
• Flaubert & Austen — the technique's masters: Madame Bovary's ironic slippage; Emma's free-indirect misjudgments (the early English practitioner).
• Leech & Short's speech/thought presentation cline — FDS / DS / FIS / IS / NRSA for speech and FDT / DT / FIT / IT / NRTA for thought; a precise scale of narratorial control (Style in Fiction).
• Free indirect thought (FIT) vs direct/indirect thought — where FID sits on that cline, and why it is the close-third default.
• Bakhtin's double-voiced discourse — a single utterance carrying two intentions, author's and character's; FID as the novel's characteristic hybrid.
• Deixis in FID — "here," "now," "tomorrow" anchored to the character's moment inside past-tense narration; the grammatical tell.
• The irony engine — FID renders a belief as the prose's own, so the reader inhabits the misreading ("Marcus smiled, and she took it for warmth"); why the vault-bounded narrator's gold is FID.
• Coloring / contagion — narration taking on a character's vocabulary even outside quoted thought; distance shading toward the figural.

references/rendering-interiority.md — turning recorded thought into a mind on the page; load when the POV's inner life must become prose without inventing it.

• Cohn's three modes (third-person) — psycho-narration, quoted monologue, narrated monologue; the map of consciousness-rendering (Transparent Minds, 1978).
• Psycho-narration — the narrator reports the character's mind in their own (narratorial) words; the most distanced, most flexible mode.
• Quoted monologue — the character's thought quoted directly (I can't do this, she thought); interiority at zero remove.
• Narrated monologue — figural thought in free indirect style (= FID; the seam with the previous file).
• Consonant vs dissonant narration (Cohn) — the narrator in harmony with the character's mind vs standing above and judging it.
• Interior monologue (direct / indirect) — the character's mental voice given continuously; Dujardin's Les Lauriers sont coupés (1887), the technique Joyce credited as its origin.
• Stream of consciousness — the associative, pre-verbal flow (William James coined the phrase, 1890); Joyce, Woolf, Faulkner in practice.
• Humphrey's four techniques — direct and indirect interior monologue, omniscient description, soliloquy (a working taxonomy of the stream, 1954).
• Soliloquy — sustained self-address, more ordered and audience-aware than interior monologue.
• Autonomous monologue — unframed inner speech with no narratorial tag (Molly Bloom's close of Ulysses); the stream at its most radical.
• Palmer's "fictional minds" / thought report — the whole-mind, "social minds" approach beyond the speech-category cline (Fictional Minds, 2004).
• Rendering sensation & perception — the body and senses as interiority's ground floor (heat, nausea, the caught breath); where recorded state becomes felt prose.
• Grounding rule (project-specific) — interiority is the POV's recorded thought rendered, never confabulated at write-time (recording-model.md).

C. Time — when it's told

references/tense-and-time.md — the grammatical footing of the telling; load when choosing past vs present, or coupling tense to a real-time or retrospective POV.

• Past tense (the epic preterite) — fiction's default; Hamburger's point that in fiction the preterite loses its pastness and simply means "story."
• Present tense — immediacy, restricted knowledge, a cinematic now; its contemporary rise and the fatigue/backlash it draws.
• Historical present — telling past events in the present for vividness; the oral-anecdote and set-piece device.
• Future & conditional tense — rare, prophetic or hypothetical (Butor's second-person future in La Modification); the road-not-taken register.
• Tense ↔ POV coupling — real-time narration pairs with the present or a pastness-less past; retrospection needs a past that knows the arc.
• Order revisited (analepsis / prolepsis) — flashback and flashforward as the retrospective narrator's foreshadowing (formalized in focalization-and-narratology.md).
• Tense shifts as signal — moving between tenses to mark memory, dream, or a change of temporal footing; and the risk of incoherence.
• Duration & the "now" of narration — whether telling-time and told-time coincide (simultaneous narration) or diverge.

D. The texture of the prose — the sentence-level surface

references/voice-and-diction.md — the felt personality of the telling; load when establishing or distinguishing a narrator's voice, or matching diction to a POV.

• Voice — the felt personality of the prose: the sum of diction, syntax, rhythm, and stance; what makes a page unmistakably one narrator's.
• Diction / lexical register — high / middle / low; formal vs colloquial; the word-choice that sets a narrator's class, era, and cast of mind.
• Latinate vs Anglo-Saxon diction — abstract, polysyllabic, cool vs concrete, monosyllabic, blunt; the English writer's central tonal lever.
• Concrete vs abstract language — the named thing vs the category; the grain that makes prose felt rather than argued.
• Tone & attitude — the narrator's stance toward the material and the reader (ironic, elegiac, wry, clinical).
• The three classical styles (genera dicendi) — grand, middle, and plain; the rhetorical registers matched to matter and aim.
• Idiolect, dialect, sociolect — the individual, regional, and class markings of speech; how a voice signals who is speaking.
• Persona & ethos — the constructed speaker the prose projects, and the credibility it earns (rhetoric's ethos).
• Bakhtin's heteroglossia — the novel as a collision of many social voices, no single authorial monotone; the polyphonic ideal.
• Skaz — narration miming a spoken, vernacular teller (the Russian term; Gogol, Twain, Salinger); voice foregrounded as performance.
• Distinct voices (the critic's check) — each POV rendered in a separable idiom so the reader never confuses two minds (design.md's continuity/critic gate — the LLM-side "distinct voice" test).
• Word music & connotation — the sound and freight a word carries beyond its denotation; diction as feeling, not only meaning.

references/show-vs-tell.md — dramatize or report, at the prose grain; load when deciding whether a moment should be rendered in the senses or stated.

• Show vs tell — render the experience so it lands vs state the conclusion; the craft chestnut, and its real (narrow) truth.
• Chekhov's dictum — "Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass"; the origin-quote of the maxim.
• Lubbock's "dramatize" — The Craft of Fiction (1921): the novel that shows so it "tells itself"; the scenic ideal, after Henry James.
• James's scenic method — "Dramatize, dramatize"; rendering over narrating as the Jamesian standard.
• The reality effect (Barthes) — the concrete, "useless" detail that signals this is real (l'effet de réel, 1968); showing as authentication.
• The objective correlative (Eliot) — emotion conveyed through an external object, situation, or chain of events, never asserted (1919).
• The significant detail / synecdoche — the one telling particular standing for the whole; selection, not accumulation.
• "Thisness" / haecceitas (Wood) — the irreducible concrete detail that gives fiction its lifelike density (How Fiction Works).
• Filtering and the removed narrator — cutting "she saw / he noticed" so the image lands directly (ties to narrative-distance.md).
• The honest counter — telling is not the enemy: summary, transition, and earned authorial statement are indispensable; "show don't tell" over-applied flattens prose (Gardner's and modern pushback).
• What to show vs tell — dramatize the load-bearing, emotionally hinged moment; tell the connective tissue (ties to scene-and-summary.md).

references/scene-and-summary.md — the pace of the telling; load when deciding to stage a moment blow-by-blow or compress it, and how the two alternate.

• Scene vs summary — the moment rendered blow-by-blow (scene) vs time compressed and reported (summary); the pacing pair.
• Genette's five speeds — pause, scene, summary, ellipsis, and stretch/slow-down; narrative duration as the ratio of story-time to text-time.
• Scene (isochrony) — dialogue and moment-to-moment action, where telling-time ≈ told-time; the reader's real-time.
• Summary — the acceleration that covers weeks in a sentence; how a narrative breathes and travels between scenes.
• Ellipsis — the elided gap, time skipped entirely; what a story doesn't narrate, and how the reader infers it.
• Descriptive pause — narration halts while description runs; setting and the held image.
• Bentley's scene / summary / description — Phyllis Bentley's practitioner triad of narrative modes and their alternation (1946).
• Pacing & the rhythm of alternation — the breathing pattern of scene → summary → scene; density where it matters, speed where it doesn't.
• Enter late, leave early — cutting a scene to its charged center; where to start and stop rendering.
• The depth rule for prose (project link) — dramatize the hinges, summarize the tail; the "resolve to what the book levers on" discipline at the render layer (design.md).
• The unwitnessed-scene constraint — what can be a scene, vs only summary, is bounded by whether a POV was present (narration.md).

references/prose-rhythm-and-cadence.md — the music of the sentence; load when a passage needs to move — for punch, momentum, weight, or fall.

• Sentence as the unit of style — rhythm, emphasis, and meaning built at the sentence; the working grain of prose music.
• Loose / cumulative sentence — the base clause first, modifiers trailing; Christensen's "generative rhetoric of the sentence."
• Periodic sentence — meaning suspended to the end; tension held, then released.
• Balanced sentence — symmetrical clauses (isocolon, antithesis); poise and contrast.
• Parataxis vs hypotaxis — clauses set side by side (short, blunt, Hemingway) vs subordinated and nested (long, architectural); the master syntactic dial.
• Sentence-length variation — the long-then-short contrast; the short sentence's punch after a long run.
• Schemes of repetition — anaphora, epistrophe, anadiplosis; structural repetition for emphasis and momentum.
• Asyndeton & polysyndeton — dropping conjunctions (speed, clipped) vs piling them ("and… and… and," biblical, accumulating).
• Tricolon & isocolon — the three-part and equal-membered patterns the ear expects and remembers.
• Chiasmus & antithesis — crossed and opposed structures; the shapeliness of reversal.
• Sound devices — alliteration, assonance, consonance, sibilance; euphony vs cacophony as felt texture.
• Cadence & the fall of a sentence — the rhythm of the close; the "dying fall" and end-weight / end-focus.
• Punctuation as tempo — the comma, dash, colon, and full stop as the score's rests and beats.
• Prose rhythm (the tradition) — Saintsbury's A History of English Prose Rhythm (1912); the stress-patterning below the meaning.
• Practitioner guides — Le Guin's Steering the Craft, Tufte's Artful Sentences, Fish's How to Write a Sentence, Forsyth's The Elements of Eloquence; the craft well for sentence music.

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How to use this well — the method

1. Set the boundary first. Before any craft choice, fix the POV and its vault: whose knowledge bounds this scene, and from when. This is not a style decision — it is the knowledge wall (point-of-view.md), and every choice below serves it.
2. Route by decision. Perspective & the knowledge boundary → files A. How close, and how a mind reaches the page → files B. When it's told → file C. The sentence-level surface → files D. Read the router, pull the one file the moment needs, skip the rest.
3. Read the field, not one truth. Each reference is a menu of peers; the repo's defaults (close third, past tense, POV-bounded) are reference points, marked swappable — reach for what fits this POV and moment.
4. Let the boundary do the drama. Reach for free indirect discourse and close psychic distance to make the reader inhabit the POV's misreading; that vault-bounded irony is the payoff to render toward, not something to write around.
5. Render, don't invent. Interiority is recorded thought made prose; the cut is what happened. The toolbox shapes how it's told, never what is told — facts and minds come only from the cut and the vault slice.
6. Match voice to POV. Give each viewpoint a distinct diction and rhythm (voice-and-diction.md) so two minds never sound alike — the continuity critic checks exactly this.
7. Pace by the hinge. Dramatize the load-bearing, emotionally charged moment; summarize the connective tissue (show-vs-tell.md, scene-and-summary.md) — the depth rule, at the prose layer. And never stage a scene no POV witnessed.

Cross-file spine

Files A–D are the field of craft, arranged by the narrator's decision-flow. The POV/vault boundary is the spine that runs through all of them: whatever device a file offers — a focalization, a distance, a free-indirect turn, a summary — it lands in this project only as prose bounded by what the POV character knows. Read the craft file for the how; hold docs/narration.md and docs/recording-model.md for why the boundary is non-negotiable.

Status

Router + index complete; the eleven references/ files are outlined in references/_index.md and authored in a later pass. Until then, use the one-line entries above as pointers and reach for the named framework and its provenance directly. Nothing here is prescriptive: it is a well to draw from, framework-neutral, holding rival modes side by side so the scene — not the toolbox — decides.