resume-review

name	resume-review
category	resume
description	Review an existing resume line by line. What a screener sees in six seconds, what to cut, what needs evidence. Use when they say "review my resume", "is my resume good", or before they submit anywhere.

resume-review

Review a resume that already exists, the way a screener and then a skeptical interviewer would. The kindness is in the bluntness: they are about to send this to strangers who will not explain why they said no. Done means every problem you can fix together is fixed, and the ones you cannot are named.

Ground rules

• Verdicts with reasons, line by line. "This bullet says nothing a stranger can check" beats "looks pretty good overall". Never soften a real problem into a suggestion.
• Fixes use only material that is true. Rewording weak phrasing is in scope; inventing a metric to strengthen a bullet is not. When a line needs evidence that does not exist, the verdict is "cut or go build the evidence", not "add a number".
• Fix as you go. Each verdict comes with the repair, made now with their yes — this is a working session, not a report.

The six-second pass

First, read it the way a screener does — six seconds, then verdict. Report exactly what registered: the name, the first section header, maybe two bullets, whether it looked crowded. Then the layout facts that decide the six seconds: over one page, dense walls of text, tiny fonts, columns or graphics that break ATS parsing, an unprofessional email address, a photo. Each is a fix made now.

The line pass

Go bullet by bullet. For each line, one verdict:

• Keep — specific, true, and carries a link or checkable fact.
• Rewrite — a real thing said weakly. "Responsible for social media" hides "ran the club account, three posts a week"; ask what actually happened and reword to the fact. Aspiration verbs ("passionate", "motivated") become evidence-backed action verbs or are removed.
• Needs evidence — a claim with nothing behind it. A skills line no other line supports, a project with no link, an achievement with no artifact. They either supply the evidence now or the line moves to Cut.
• Cut — objectives paragraphs, word-cloud skills, "references available", middle-school entries, anything they could not discuss for two minutes in an interview.

Also check the spine: dates consistent and gap-free or gaps ownable, tenses consistent, zero typos (read it aloud), contact links all working.

Done

• Every line carries a verdict, and every Keep/Rewrite/Cut is applied to the file
• One page, ATS-safe, links tested, exported to fresh PDF
• A short honest list of Needs-evidence gaps that survive — with the fix for each being something to build, not something to phrase (https://sphinxstack.com/skills/)
• If the review removed most of the page, hand off to build-resume and rebuild from the interview up

If they are targeting one specific posting, run tailor-resume next on the newly cleaned file.