| name | run2_chinese-poetry-composition |
| description | Refined techniques for composing classical Chinese regulated verse on war-and-peace themes, with verified imagery, couplet examples, and common pitfalls. |
Classical Chinese Poetry: War Suffering and Peace Longing
Thematic Arc for 律诗 on War/Peace
Structure the 4 couplets as a narrative arc:
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首联 (Lines 1-2) — Macroscopic Setting: Wide-angle view of war
- Use large-scale imagery: sky, mountains, frontier passes
- Establish the atmosphere of widespread conflict
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颔联 (Lines 3-4) — Human Suffering: Zoom in to ordinary people
- Specific family members: old man, young child, woman
- Concrete actions: sending off, crying, asking
- This is the emotional heart of the poem
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颈联 (Lines 5-6) — Physical Destruction: The war's aftermath
- Ruined buildings, scorched fields, unburied dead
- Transition from living people to dead landscape
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尾联 (Lines 7-8) — Wish for Peace: Closing hope
- Classical formula: wish weapons stored, four seas at peace
- Shift from sorrow to aspiration
Verified Imagery Vocabulary
War Setting (Lines 1-2)
| Image | Characters | Meaning |
|---|
| Beacon fires | 烽火连天 | fires connecting sky = widespread war |
| Frontier pass | 出塞 | going beyond the Great Wall |
| Battle dress | 战衣寒 | cold battle garments (sensory detail) |
| Mountain obscured | 蔽岭山/遮远山 | smoke hiding mountains |
Human Suffering (Lines 3-4) — for parallel couplet
Best contrasting subject pairs:
- 老翁 (old man) ↔ 稚女 (young girl) — generation contrast
- 老母 (old mother) ↔ 孤儿 (orphan) — family loss
- 白发翁 (white-haired elder) ↔ 黄口儿 (young child)
Best action pairs for parallel:
- 挥泪 (wave away tears) ↔ 含悲 (hold grief within)
- 送儿去 (send son away) ↔ 问父难 (ask about father's hardship)
Destruction (Lines 5-6) — for parallel couplet
Best subject pairs:
- 田舍 (farmhouse) ↔ 征魂 (soldier's soul)
- 村落 (village) ↔ 征途 (battlefield road)
Best verb pairs:
- 烧成 (burned into) ↔ 埋没 (buried/covered)
- 化作 (transformed into) ↔ 葬于 (buried in)
Best ending pairs (adjective/noun):
- 焦土苦 (scorched earth, bitter) ↔ 乱冢残 (disheveled graves, broken)
- 灰烬空 (ash and emptiness) ↔ 白骨寒 (white bones, cold)
Peace Wish (Lines 7-8)
Classical closing formulas:
- 但愿戈矛皆入库 → 四海承平万古安
(I only wish all weapons stored → four seas peaceful, ten thousand ages safe)
- 何时戈戟销兵去 → 天下苍生共太平
(When will weapons melt away → all under heaven share great peace)
Common Pitfalls to Avoid
- Rhyme repetition: Don't reuse the same rhyme character (e.g., 寒 twice)
- Bad parallel: Don't pair 1-char word with 2-char compound at same position
- Rhyme on wrong line: Lines 3, 5, 7 must NOT end with -an rhyme group words
- Weak ending on non-rhyme lines: Avoid ending lines 3,5,7 with flat/neutral words; use vivid verbs or adjectives
- Disconnected narrative: Each couplet should build on the previous one
Verified Example Poem: 望和平
望和平
烽火连天蔽岭山 [rhyme: 山 shān]
征夫出塞战衣寒 [rhyme: 寒 hán]
老翁挥泪送儿去 [no rhyme: 去 qù — 仄声 ✓]
稚女含悲问父难 [rhyme: 难 nán]
田舍烧成焦土苦 [no rhyme: 苦 kǔ — 仄声 ✓]
征魂埋没乱冢残 [rhyme: 残 cán]
但愿戈矛皆入库 [no rhyme: 库 kù — 仄声 ✓]
四海承平万古安 [rhyme: 安 ān]
Verification of this poem:
- 7 chars × 8 lines ✓
- Rhyme: 山/寒/难/残/安 all end in -an group ✓
- No repeated rhyme characters ✓
- Non-rhyming lines end in 仄声: 去(qù)4th, 苦(kǔ)3rd, 库(kù)4th ✓
- 颔联 parallel: 老翁↔稚女, 挥泪↔含悲, 送儿↔问父, 去↔难 ✓
- 颈联 parallel: 田舍↔征魂, 烧成↔埋没, 焦土↔乱冢, 苦↔残 ✓
- Narrative arc: war setting → family grief → destruction → peace wish ✓
