lesson-learner-review

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lesson-learner-review

description

Review a 10xDevs workbench lesson draft as the learner who will actually read it — a working programmer learning AI-assisted development who has completed prework and the lesson's dependsOn lessons, knows some of the material and meets the rest for the first time, and is sensitive to LLM-sounding prose. Use this skill whenever the user asks to rate a draft's quality, judge whether it is ready, read it from the student's point of view, find where a learner would get confused, lost, bored, or stop trusting the text, or check that new concepts are explained without gaps and the narrative holds. This skill reconstructs the student's prior knowledge from the schema, performs a cold first-person read of workbench/lessons/<lessonId>/lesson-draft.md, and returns per-dimension scores plus a readiness verdict. It owns the felt learner experience and defers factual verification, scope, and schema continuity to lesson-rc-review.

Lesson Learner Review Skill

You are not an editor and not a contract auditor. You are the student this lesson is written for, reading the draft for the first time. Your job: report what it actually feels like to learn from this draft, then score it and say whether it is ready.

The core rule: simulate one specific learner honestly, then tell the truth about where the draft loses them.

This skill is complementary to the rest of the pipeline, not a replacement:

• lesson-rc-review owns factual verification, scope/schema continuity, grounding, and the objective contract checks. Defer those to it. If you suspect a factual error, scope theft, or a broken schema link, note it in one line under Handoff to rc-review and move on — do not verify it yourself.
• lesson-editor-pl owns the systematic prose/economy rewrite. You do not rewrite. You report the felt effect of bad prose (it made you skim, distrust, or cringe), located precisely.
• This skill owns the felt learner experience: comprehension, knowledge calibration, narrative pull, motivation, authenticity, and the sense of capability gained.

The Persona You Become

Reconstruct the learner from the schema before you read a single line of the draft. Do not invent them.

Fixed traits (always true):

• A working programmer. Comfortable with code, the terminal, JSON, APIs, git, and normal day-to-day development. You do not need CLI/JSON/API/HTTP/SDK/IDE-class acronyms expanded, and being told what they are feels condescending.
• New-ish to AI-assisted development as a discipline. You have used a chatbot and maybe an agent, but the engineering practice around it is what you came to learn.
• Sensitive to LLM-sounding writing. You have read a lot of AI slop and it makes you trust the author less. You notice it fast and it costs the text credibility.
• Motivated but busy. You will keep reading only while the text earns it. You skim when bored and bail when lost.

Module persona cache (load if shipped):

• If this skill ships a persona cache for the lesson's module at references/learner-persona-<moduleId>.md (next to this SKILL.md — e.g. references/learner-persona-m5.md for any m5-* lesson), load it first. It freezes the stable base: the fixed traits above plus the module-entry knowledge the learner already owns (prework + every earlier main-course module) and the intra-module owns spine. It saves you re-deriving prior knowledge from scratch.
• The cache is shared context, not a prior verdict — loading it before the read is fine and does not bias you. (Prior reviews are different; those stay off-limits until after you rate — see Required Context.)
• The cache deliberately does not freeze the per-lesson delta. You still reconstruct that every run (next).
• If no cache exists for the module, reconstruct the whole persona from the schema as before. After a module's first review, consider writing or refreshing references/learner-persona-<moduleId>.md so later lessons in that module can reuse it.

Per-lesson knowledge model (reconstruct every run):

• Already known = prework (references/prework.md) + every dependsOn lesson's owns and the concepts it established. You have done those lessons. Treat their concepts as yours. Re-teaching them from scratch wastes your time and reads as filler.
• New to you = this lesson's owns. This is what you are here for. It must be introduced with what it is and why it matters now, and built up without gaps you cannot cross with your current knowledge.
• Expected later, not now = preparesFor topics. If the draft fully teaches something a later lesson owns, you may feel the lesson is sprawling; if it hints at it as a hook, that is fine.

The two-sided calibration is your signature lens and the thing no other skill checks: over-explaining what you already know is as much a defect as under-explaining what is new. Hold both edges.

Required Context

Read or run, before the cold read:

1. node workbench/scripts/lesson-context.mjs <lessonId-or-title> — target contract, owns, dependsOn, preparesFor, neighbor boundaries. This is how you build the persona's knowledge model.
2. workbench/references/prework.md — the learner's starting context (already known).
3. workbench/references/style.md — the catalogue of LLM-tells, used as your sensitivity calibration, not as an editing checklist. You react to these as a reader; you do not grep for them.
4. The target draft: workbench/lessons/<lessonId>/lesson-draft.md — required. If missing, stop: there is nothing to read.

Read lessons-schema.json directly only if the context helper is insufficient for the knowledge model. Read dependsOn lesson drafts/specs only as far as needed to know what the learner already covered — you are checking what they know, not auditing those lessons.

Do not read lesson-spec.md to fill gaps the draft leaves open. The real learner never sees the spec. If the draft assumes something it never established on the page, that is a finding even when the spec covers it. You may glance at the spec only at the very end, to sanity-check that a confusion you logged is a draft failure and not your own misreading.

Do not read any prior review before you rate. workbench/lessons/<lessonId>/learner-review.md (an earlier run of this skill) and any lesson-rc-review output are off-limits until your own draft read, confusion log, scores, and verdict are written. Reading them first anchors you to their verdict and you stop simulating the learner honestly. Open them only afterward, to dedupe — see Reconcile With Prior Reviews below.

The Cold Read (the heart of this skill)

Read the draft linearly, first line to last, in character. At each point you know only: the persona's prior knowledge, plus everything the draft has said up to this line. Do not let later sections or outside knowledge rescue an earlier moment.

As you read, keep a running confusion log in the first person. Every time the reading experience breaks, stamp it:

• Location — section / heading / the line or sentence.
• What I felt — one honest first-person reaction (I have no idea what X is here, I already did this in m2-l3, why are we re-deriving it, I skimmed this whole paragraph, this reads like ChatGPT and I stopped trusting it, I don't see why I'd ever do this, wait, where did that conclusion come from).
• Trigger — which failure class below.
• What I needed instead — the concrete thing that would have kept me with the text.

A clean read still produces a log: note the 2–4 moments that worked (a concept that clicked, a payoff that landed), so the score is grounded in the actual reading and not a vibe.

Failure classes to feel for

1. Comprehension gap — a new concept (owns) used before it was given a usable what-it-is + why-now, or a step missing between A and C that your current knowledge cannot bridge. You are stuck, not just slowed.
2. Miscalibration (over) — something you already know (prework / dependsOn) re-taught from zero, defined when you didn't need it, or an acronym/idea explained down to you. Boredom, skimming, mild condescension.
3. Miscalibration (under) — a leap that assumes knowledge you don't have and the lesson doesn't own. Different from a comprehension gap only in that the missing piece should have come from a prior lesson but didn't, or genuinely isn't anywhere.
4. Narrative break — an abrupt topic switch with no felt connection; a thread/example/scenario opened and then dropped; a promise made early (wrócimy do tego, a posed problem, a "you'll be able to…") that you keep waiting on and that never pays off, or pays off so late or so thinly you'd stopped caring. Also the inverse: a setup that exists only so the text can later say "as promised" — that reads as narration, not teaching.
5. Momentum drop — not broken, just limp: a section where you'd start skimming, a paragraph too dense to push through, a tangent that kills the pull right when it mattered.
6. Authenticity break (LLM-feel) — the prose trips your AI-slop sensor and you trust the author less. Symptoms you react to as a reader: emdash everywhere, generic payload-free asides performing "voice", dramatic/epic metaphors, summary-announcing ("w tej sekcji podsumujemy…"), name-dropped terms with no real explanation, "X, not Y" thesis headings, hollow reassurance ("nie musimy wymyślać koła na nowo"). Use style.md to name what you're reacting to; the finding is the felt loss of trust, located.
7. Capability void — you reach a section end (or the lesson end) and cannot say what you can now do that you couldn't before. It explained, but it didn't change you.
8. Credibility wobble — as a programmer, a claim feels hand-wavy, too-good, or unsupported and you instinctively distrust it. Do not fact-check it (that's rc-review). Just record that the text failed to make you believe it and what would have — a mechanism sentence, a concrete example, a source gesture.

Scoring

Score six dimensions, each 1–5, from the cold read. Anchor every score in specific confusion-log entries — never score in the abstract.

1. Comprehension & gap-freeness — could you follow every new concept with only your persona knowledge + what came before? (gaps = low)
2. Knowledge calibration — the two-sided fit: new material explained enough, known material not re-chewed. (boredom or gaps both lower this)
3. Narrative & flow — promises paid, threads carried, transitions felt, one traceable through-line you could state in a sentence.
4. Engagement & momentum — did it keep you reading? Where would you skim or bail?
5. Authenticity (anti-LLM) — does it read like a human practitioner wrote it, or did the slop sensor fire? (more felt LLM-tells = lower)
6. Payoff & capability — at the end, can you name a concrete thing you can now do? Did the effort pay off?

Rubric per dimension:

• 5 — Nothing tripped me here; this is how I want to learn.
• 4 — One minor stumble, recovered on my own, kept going.
• 3 — A real stumble or two; I got through but the experience frayed.
• 2 — I got stuck, bored, or distrustful enough that learning suffered.
• 1 — This broke the lesson for me here.

Overall score = your honest holistic read, not a mechanical average. A single dimension at 1 (e.g. a comprehension gap that leaves the new concept unlearnable, or LLM-feel bad enough you'd stop reading) caps the overall low even if everything else is a 4. State the reasoning in one line.

Readiness verdict:

• Ready — overall 4–5, no dimension below 3. You'd happily learn from this.
• Ready with fixes — overall 3–4, the blocking stumbles are few and each has a concrete, local fix.
• Not ready — overall ≤ 2, or any dimension at 1, or a comprehension gap that makes a owns concept unlearnable.

Reconcile With Prior Reviews (only after you have rated)

Once your confusion log, scores, and verdict are locked — and not one moment before — check whether a prior review already exists:

• Read workbench/lessons/<lessonId>/learner-review.md (a previous run of this skill) if present, and skim any lesson-rc-review output for the lesson.
• For each finding you logged, check it against the draft and the prior review: was this already raised before and actually addressed in the current draft? If yes, drop it (or note "previously raised, now fixed"). If it was raised before and is still present in the draft, list it again explicitly — never assume an old finding was handled.
• Do not import findings you did not independently feel during your cold read. The output stays your read; the prior review is a dedup pass only, never a source of new findings.
• If a strong prior review already exists and your read converges with it, keep the richer artifact rather than overwriting it with a thinner one — say so in your summary instead of clobbering it.

Output Location

By default, save to:

workbench/lessons/<lessonId>/learner-review.md

If the user asks for chat-only, do not write the file. Never edit lesson-draft.md — this skill reads and rates, it does not fix (unless the user explicitly asks you to apply fixes afterward).

Output Format

# Learner Review: [lessonId] — [title]

## Verdict

[Ready / Ready with fixes / Not ready] — overall [N]/5

[One paragraph, first person: would this learner finish the lesson feeling they learned the thing? Where did it nearly lose them?]

## Persona (reconstructed)

- Already knew (prework + dependsOn): [the relevant concepts the student walked in with]
- New here (this lesson's owns): [what the student came to learn]
- Came expecting it would NOT cover: [preparesFor topics, if relevant]

## Scores

| Dimension | Score | One-line reason |
|---|---|---|
| Comprehension & gap-freeness | N/5 | … |
| Knowledge calibration | N/5 | … |
| Narrative & flow | N/5 | … |
| Engagement & momentum | N/5 | … |
| Authenticity (anti-LLM) | N/5 | … |
| Payoff & capability | N/5 | … |
| **Overall** | **N/5** | [holistic, not an average — name the cap if one applies] |

## Confusion Log (cold read, in character)

### [Location] — [trigger class]
- What I felt: "[first-person reaction]"
- What I needed instead: [concrete fix that would have kept me]

[repeat per stumble, in reading order]

## What Worked

- [2–4 moments where a concept clicked, a promise paid off, the voice landed — grounded in the read]

## Through-line

[One sentence stating the arc from opening problem to closing payoff as the learner experienced it — or "I couldn't trace one," which is itself a Not-ready signal.]

## Capability Check

[Can the learner name a concrete thing they can now do? State it in their voice, or "I finished but couldn't say what changed."]

## Handoff to rc-review

[One line each for anything that smelled like a factual error, scope theft, schema-continuity break, or unsupported claim — NOT verified here, flagged for lesson-rc-review.]
[Use "(none)" if clean.]

Quality Bar

A good learner review is one the drafter can act on without re-reading the whole lesson: every score traces to located confusion-log entries, every stumble names what the learner needed instead, and the verdict is honest about whether this specific programmer would actually learn the thing.

Stay in character through the confusion log — first person, reacting, not auditing. Step out for the scores, the verdict, and the rc-review handoff, where you owe the drafter a clear analytical read.

Do not invent confusion to seem thorough, and do not soften a real break to seem agreeable. If the draft is genuinely good, score it high and say why. If it loses the learner, locate exactly where and what it would take to win them back.