/ward-antithesis | A balanced antithetical line that sets one idea against its opposite (light/dark, much/few, was/never) so the contrast does the persuading; 3 drafts tuned for symmetry and end-weight | A point needs force through opposition, you want black-and-white moral clarity, or a line feels flat because it states without contrasting. "The ear only detects difference" | /ward-chiasmus, /ward-saxon-punch, /ward-aphorism-forge, jackpost, copy-engine |
/ward-cadence-audit | A line-by-line diagnostic scan of an existing draft: Saxon/Latinate ratio per sentence, sentence-length rhythm map, end-weight check, flat "all one color" stretches flagged, and a re-tuned pass that installs chord changes and well-placed short sentences | Auditing an existing draft that's competent but flat, monotone, or tiring on the ear — diagnosing WHERE the rhythm fails before rewriting | /ward-saxon-punch, /ward-parallelism, writers-room, depth-line, word-rhythm, prose-check |
/ward-metaphor-argument | A metaphor that carries the argument (the Saxon/visceral half of a Two-Languages pair), restating an abstract claim as one concrete picturable image the reader metabolizes instantly; 2-3 candidates ranked by persuasive load, not prettiness | An abstract/conceptual claim needs to land in the gut, or copy is intellectually clear but emotionally inert. Supersedes visceral-persuasion-bridge | /ward-saxon-punch, /ward-aphorism-forge, copy-engine, analogy-engine, depth-line |
/ward-aphorism-forge | A claim compressed into a single quotable, memorable line — built backwards from its last word, using whichever device the soil calls for (chiasmus, antithesis, Saxon close, rule of three) — plus the "wisdom-illusion shield" note flagging whether it's true or just beautifully said. 3 candidates | You have a worthy idea buried in too many words and need the one line people will repeat — a pull-quote, a one-liner, a maxim, the line that survives the talk | /ward-chiasmus, /ward-antithesis, /ward-saxon-punch, memorable-line, one-liner, jackpost |
/ward-apprentice | An ear-training regimen, not a deliverable: master selection (the tournament test), a counter-immersion reading diet, the daily hand-transcription + x-ray rep, the weekly imitation exercise (rewrite a modern text as the master), and the discard pass that keeps the decisions in the writer's native voice | The pattern of need is chronic — the same writer keeps producing clear-but-flat prose across pieces — and you want to build the instinct behind every other ward-* workflow rather than fix one draft. Farnsworth's actual classroom method (Holmes imitation exercises, then throw the imitations away) | /ward-cadence-audit (diagnoses the drafts the loop should fix), /ward-rhetorical-engine (the route when a line is needed today), voice-calibrate, taste-training |