carocut-planner-humanizer

name	carocut-planner-humanizer
description	旁白脚本口语化处理与情绪节奏标注。

Script Humanizer

Removes AI writing patterns to make voiceover scripts sound human. Based on documented AI writing patterns that trained language models tend to produce.

Core Rules

Rule	Action
Delete filler phrases	Remove connectors that add no information
Break formula structures	Avoid binary comparisons, dramatic reveals
Vary rhythm	Mix sentence lengths, use 2 or 4 items instead of 3
Trust readers	State facts directly, skip softening language
No slogans	If it sounds quotable, rewrite it

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Content Patterns to Fix

1. Exaggerated Significance

Flagged Words: "marks a", "key moment", "demonstrates the importance", "highlights", "underscores", "reflects broader", "symbolizes", "contributes to", "paves the way"

Wrong:

这一举措标志着云原生架构发展史上的关键时刻，凸显了消息队列系统在现代分布式架构中的重要作用。

Correct:

消息队列是分布式系统的核心。有了它，每秒百万级请求也能稳定处理。

2. Vague Attribution

Flagged Words: "experts believe", "studies show", "industry reports indicate", "observers note", "some critics argue"

Wrong:

专家认为这种技术在提高系统可靠性方面发挥着至关重要的作用。研究表明它能显著提升性能。

Correct:

根据清华大学 2023 年的测试，采用该技术后系统吞吐量提升了 3 倍。

3. AI Vocabulary

High-frequency AI words (Chinese):

• "此外" (furthermore)
• "至关重要" (crucial)
• "深入探讨" (delve into)
• "格局" (landscape)
• "展示" (showcase)
• "彰显" (highlight)
• "确保" (ensure)
• "独特" (unique)
• "全面" (comprehensive)

Wrong:

此外，消息队列系统作为现代分布式架构的关键组件，在确保系统可靠性方面发挥着至关重要的作用。

Correct:

消息队列让系统更稳定。服务之间通过它传递数据，即使某个服务暂时挂了，消息也不会丢。

4. Copula Evasion

Flagged Patterns: "serves as", "acts as", "functions as", "represents"

Wrong:

Gallery 825 作为 LAAA 的当代艺术展览空间。画廊设有四个独立空间，拥有超过 3000 平方英尺。

Correct:

Gallery 825 是 LAAA 的当代艺术展览空间。画廊有四个房间，总面积 3000 平方英尺。

5. Rule of Three Overuse

AI tends to force ideas into groups of three for artificial "completeness".

Wrong:

活动包括主题演讲、小组讨论和社交机会。与会者可以期待创新、灵感和行业洞察。

Correct:

活动包括演讲和小组讨论。会议之间有非正式社交的时间。

Rule: Use 2 or 4 items, not 3.

6. Generic Positive Conclusions

Flagged Words: "bright future", "pursuit of excellence", "important step forward", "exciting times ahead"

Wrong:

公司的未来看起来光明。激动人心的时代即将到来，他们继续追求卓越的旅程。

Correct:

公司计划明年再开设两个分支机构。

7. -ing Phrase Shallow Analysis

Flagged Patterns: "highlighting...", "ensuring...", "reflecting...", "contributing to...", "fostering..."

Wrong:

寺庙的蓝色、绿色和金色色调与该地区的自然美景产生共鸣，象征着德克萨斯州的蓝帽花、墨西哥湾和多样化的德克萨斯州景观，反映了社区与土地的深厚联系。

Correct:

寺庙使用蓝色、绿色和金色。建筑师表示这些颜色是为了呼应当地的蓝帽花和墨西哥湾海岸。

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Style Patterns to Fix

8. Dash Overuse

AI uses dashes more frequently than humans, mimicking "punchy" sales copy.

Wrong:

这个术语主要由荷兰机构推广——而不是由人民自己。你不会说"荷兰，欧洲"作为地址——但这种错误标记仍在继续——即使在官方文件中。

Correct:

这个术语主要由荷兰机构推广，而不是由人民自己。你不会说"荷兰，欧洲"作为地址，但这种错误标记在官方文件中仍在继续。

9. Negation Parallelism

Flagged Patterns: "not just...but...", "this is not merely...it is..."

Wrong:

这不仅仅是一次更新，而是我们思考生产力方式的革命。

Correct:

更新添加了批处理和键盘快捷键。

10. Synonym Cycling

AI has repetition penalties that cause excessive synonym substitution.

Wrong:

主人公面临许多挑战。主要角色必须克服障碍。中心人物最终获得胜利。英雄回到家中。

Correct:

主人公面临许多挑战，但最终获得胜利并回到家中。

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Communication Patterns to Fix

11. Collaborative Traces

Flagged Words: "Hope this helps!", "Certainly!", "Absolutely!", "You're absolutely right!", "Let me know if..."

These indicate text was copy-pasted from chatbot conversations.

Wrong:

这是法国大革命的概述。希望这对您有帮助！如果您想让我扩展任何部分，请告诉我。

Correct:

法国大革命始于 1789 年，当时财政危机和粮食短缺导致了广泛的动荡。

12. Filler Phrases

Replace or remove these phrases:

Filler	Replacement
"为了实现这一目标"	"为了"
"由于下雨的事实"	"因为下雨"
"在这个时间点"	"现在"
"值得注意的是"	(delete)
"在某种程度上"	(delete or be specific)
"可以说"	(delete)

13. Over-qualification

Wrong:

可以潜在地可能被认为该政策可能会对结果产生一些影响。

Correct:

该政策可能会影响结果。

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Rhythm and Flow

Sentence Length Variation

• Do not have 3+ consecutive sentences of similar length
• Mix short punchy sentences with longer explanatory ones
• Paragraph endings should vary in structure

Connector Minimization

Reduce usage of:

• "此外" (Furthermore)
• "然而" (However)
• "因此" (Therefore)
• "事实上" (In fact)
• "值得注意的是" (It's worth noting)

These connectors often add no information. Either delete them or restructure so the connection is implicit.

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Emotion Rhythm Annotation (情绪节奏标注)

After removing AI patterns, annotate each VO paragraph with HTML comment metadata. These annotations are consumed by downstream steps to inform storyboard fields (pacing, visual_tension, audio_visual_relation, breathing).

Annotation Format

<!-- emotion: 好奇, tension: 0.3 -->
[VO_001] 你有没有想过，为什么日本的网页看起来如此不同？

<!-- emotion: 震惊, tension: 0.8, beat: 转折 -->
[VO_005] 但真相远比你想象的复杂。

<!-- breathing -->
（此处插入呼吸段，章节过渡）

<!-- emotion: 沉浸, tension: 0.5 -->
[VO_006] 让我们从文字本身说起。

Annotation Fields

Field	Values	Description
emotion	好奇 / 沉浸 / 震惊 / 理解 / 共鸣 / 紧张 / 释放 / 感动	当前段落的主要情绪
tension	0.0 - 1.0	张力值，反映叙事紧张程度
beat: 转折	转折	标记叙事转折点（仅在转折处添加）
breathing	(standalone)	标记章节过渡处，下游会在此处插入 breathing shot

Annotation Rules

• Every [VO_XXX] paragraph must have an <!-- emotion: ..., tension: ... --> comment directly above it
• breathing annotations are placed between chapters/sections, not attached to a VO line
• Tension values should form a natural arc: rising toward turning points, dropping after resolution
• beat: 转折 should be used sparingly (typically 2-3 per script) at major narrative shifts
• The emotion vocabulary is fixed to the 8 values listed above; do not invent new ones

Pacing Mapping

Sentence Pattern	Effect	Corresponding Storyboard Pacing
短句、断句	快节奏、紧张感	pacing=fast
长句、从句、描述性段落	慢节奏、沉浸感	pacing=slow
停顿、省略号、断句	呼吸点、留白	breathing
反问句	张力上升	visual_tension 上升
描述性段落	张力维持	visual_tension 维持

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Processing Workflow

1. Read manifests/memo.md to understand the defined narrative voice, emotional arc, and storytelling intent
2. Read the input text (manifests/script.md)
3. Phase 1 — AI Pattern Removal: Scan for all 13 patterns listed above and remove them
4. Phase 2 — Emotion Rhythm Annotation: Add HTML comment annotations to each VO paragraph
5. Preserve all [VO_XXX] markers exactly - these link to storyboard
6. Present the humanized version

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Incremental Mode

当 dispatch context 中 mode: "incremental" 时：

输入

• amendment.affected_resources 中指定的 VO 段落 ID 列表

执行规则

1. 读取 script.md，仅定位指定的 VO 段落
2. 对指定段落执行完整的 13 类模式检测和替换
3. 更新指定段落的情绪标注
4. 不触碰未指定的 VO 段落
5. 保持 [VO_XXX] 标记不变
6. 返回修改摘要（修改了哪些段落、移除了多少处模式）

不执行

• 不重新处理整个 script.md
• 不修改 VO 编号或段落顺序

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Quality Checklist

Before delivery, verify:

AI Pattern Removal

• No three consecutive same-length sentences
• Minimal connectors (此外, However)
• Lists have 2 or 4 items, not 3
• All [VO_XXX] markers preserved
• No "experts believe" or "studies show" without specific sources
• No dramatic conclusions or slogans
• Direct "is/are" used instead of "serves as/acts as"

Emotion Annotation

• Every [VO_XXX] has an emotion/tension annotation above it
• Tension values form a natural arc (not flat)
• breathing annotations placed at chapter transitions
• beat: 转折 used sparingly (2-3 per script)

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Quality Scoring

Rate the rewritten text on 1-10 scale for each dimension (total 60):

AI Pattern Removal (50 points)

Dimension	Criteria	Score
Directness	States facts without preamble	/10
Rhythm	Varied sentence lengths	/10
Trust	Respects reader intelligence	/10
Authenticity	Sounds like real human speech	/10
Concision	No unnecessary words	/10
Subtotal		/50

Emotion Annotation (10 points)

Dimension	Criteria	Score
Coverage	Every VO paragraph annotated	/5
Arc Quality	Tension values form natural narrative arc	/5
Subtotal		/10

Combined Score

Rating	Range	Meaning
Excellent	52-60	AI traces removed, annotations complete and well-shaped
Good	40-51	Solid work, minor improvements possible
Needs Revision	Below 40	Significant issues in AI patterns or annotation coverage

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Example Transformation

Before (AI patterns)

- **[VO_001]** "此外，消息队列系统作为现代分布式架构的关键组件，在确保系统可靠性方面发挥着至关重要的作用。"
- **[VO_002]** "这一技术不仅仅是一个工具，而是推动数字化转型的核心引擎，为企业带来前所未有的机遇。"
- **[VO_003]** "总而言之，消息队列技术的未来一片光明，它将继续在推动技术创新方面发挥重要作用。"

After (humanized + annotated)

<!-- emotion: 理解, tension: 0.3 -->
- **[VO_001]** "消息队列是分布式系统的核心。有了它，每秒百万级请求也能稳定处理。"

<!-- emotion: 共鸣, tension: 0.5 -->
- **[VO_002]** "三年前，我们每天处理 10 万条消息。现在是 500 万条，系统没崩过一次。"

<!-- emotion: 释放, tension: 0.2 -->
- **[VO_003]** "下一个瓶颈不在消息队列。在你怎么用它。"

Changes

• Removed "此外" and "作为...的关键组件" construction
• Replaced "至关重要的作用" with concrete example
• Deleted "不仅仅是...而是..." pattern
• Added specific numbers instead of vague claims
• Shortened sentences, added variety
• Added emotion/tension annotations for each VO paragraph

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User Communication

Completion Report

文稿润色完成。

修改统计:
  Phase 1 — AI 模式移除:
    - AI 模式移除: 15 处
    - 句子重写: 8 处
    - 连接词删除: 12 处
  Phase 2 — 情绪标注:
    - VO 段落标注: 12/12
    - 转折点标记: 2 处
    - 呼吸段标记: 3 处

质量评分: 54/60
  AI 模式移除 (46/50):
    - 直接性: 9/10
    - 节奏感: 9/10
    - 信任度: 10/10
    - 真实性: 9/10
    - 精炼度: 9/10
  情绪标注 (8/10):
    - 覆盖率: 5/5
    - 弧线质量: 3/5

所有 [VO_XXX] 标记已保留。

请审阅 manifests/script.md
确认后继续下一步。

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Important Notes

• Never change [VO_XXX] markers - these are critical references for storyboard linking
• Input file: manifests/script.md
• Output: Same file, overwritten with humanized content
• If user disagrees with changes, iterate based on feedback
• Focus on Chinese text patterns; English code/technical terms should remain unchanged
• Storytelling craft (voice consistency, iceberg rewriting, etc.) is handled by carocut-planner-planning in step-2; do not duplicate that work here