ieeesp-writing-style

name	ieeesp-writing-style
description	Use when writing or revising an IEEE S&P (Oakland) paper's prose, including the threat-model-first structure, calibrating security claims to evaluated boundaries, the first-round survival test for introductions, SoK voice, and fitting the argument into 13 compsoc pages.

IEEE S&P Writing Style

Use this for drafting and revision passes. The controlling constraint is S&P's round structure: first-round reviewers cut papers without a rebuttal (ieeesp-review-process), so the paper's first two pages must survive a professional skeptic reading alone, unaided, and slightly tired.

The first-round survival test

By the end of page 2, a reviewer must be able to answer:

1. Who is the adversary? Capabilities, access, and what winning means.
2. What is the claim? One sentence, bounded: "we show an attacker with can on , demonstrated on systems."
3. What is the evidence? The map: which section demonstrates, which measures, which proves.
4. Why now / why hard? What made this un-done until this paper.
5. Was it done responsibly? One early signal — disclosure initiated, IRB obtained — expanded later.

A draft that spends page 1 on the importance of cybersecurity fails this test; Oakland reviewers assume importance and grade specificity.

Threat model as a load-bearing section

The threat model is not scene-setting — every later claim is evaluated against it:

• State capabilities and non-capabilities ("the attacker cannot observe physical access patterns"); reviewers probe boundaries you leave implicit.
• Justify realism with citations to incidents or measurements, not intuition.
• Keep one threat model. Papers that quietly strengthen the adversary in §5 to make the defense interesting get caught in reviewer discussion.
• For defenses: state the adaptive adversary — one who knows the design — and point to where that adversary is evaluated.

Claim calibration table

Overclaim	Calibrated form
"Our defense stops X attacks"	"blocks all X instances in our corpus (n=…); adaptive variants in §6.3"
"The first work to…"	"the first demonstration on production systems of…" (and verify)
"Devastating real-world impact"	measured impact + affected-population estimate + fix status
"Provably secure"	"secure under against (Thm 2)"
"Negligible overhead"	"% median overhead on (Fig 7)"

The pattern: every security adjective is replaced by a boundary plus a pointer. This is also rebuttal insurance — calibrated claims leave less for reviewers to dispute.

SoK voice is a different register

An SoK: paper argues a thesis about the literature: the organizing claim ("defenses in this area implicitly assume X, and the assumption fails") appears on page 1 like any other claim, the taxonomy is the evidence, and the systematization must earn its verbs — compare, reconcile, invalidate — not just survey. Per the CFP, value to the community is the review criterion; a section explicitly stating what practitioners and researchers should do differently is the strongest close.

Compression for 13 compsoc pages

Two-column IEEE compsoc punishes sprawl. Cuts that preserve the argument, in order:

1. Background that a security-generalist PC member already knows (they know what ASLR is; they need your bypass's delta).
2. Repeated attack-flow narration — one figure with a numbered walkthrough replaces a page of prose.
3. Per-experiment methodology boilerplate — one Evaluation Setup subsection, referenced thereafter.
4. Defensive hedging paragraphs — one Limitations subsection beats hedges scattered through every section.

Revision pass, one command per pass:
pass 1: page-2 test — answers to the 5 questions all present? mark gaps
pass 2: grep -n "first\|novel\|significant\|devastating\|completely" body.tex
        → each hit: boundary + pointer, or delete
pass 3: threat-model diff — list every capability §4–§7 assumes;
        confirm each appears in §2
pass 4: read only topic sentences aloud — does the argument survive?

House conventions worth matching

• Present tense for the system and attack ("the attack proceeds in three stages"); past tense for what you measured.
• Third-person self-citation everywhere in the anonymous version.
• Numbered attack stages and named components; reviewers reference "stage 2" and "the monitor" in discussion — make that easy.
• Figures readable in grayscale at print size; compsoc columns are narrow.

Output format

[Page-2 test] adversary ✓/✗ · claim ✓/✗ · evidence map ✓/✗ · why-now ✓/✗ · ethics signal ✓/✗
[Threat model] boundaries explicit? drift across sections? <findings>
[Claim audit] <n> uncalibrated claims with locations>
[Compression] current <n> pp → 13 pp plan: <cut list in order>
[Register] research / SoK — voice matches? <note>