/harding-counterpoint | Fresh, habit-breaking descriptions generated by borrowing the verb/noun repertoire of an opposite category (a vapor as stone, a silence as roar) — the reader snapped awake while the line stays purely descriptive | A description has gone habitual or generic and needs to snap the reader out of received seeing, without flaunting a metaphor or breaking literalness | /harding-perception-engine, etymology-engine, word-switch, ocean-vuong, estrangement-engine |
/harding-precision-wonder | A description that turns the ordinary luminous through exact, almost-clinical precision PLUS motion-over-time ("adds calculus so the light moves") — wonder released, not slathered on with adjectives | You catch yourself slathering adjectives to make something "feel beautiful/important," or a nature/object/everyday subject feels either flat or over-decorated | /harding-perception-engine, /harding-counterpoint, michael-connelly-detail, depth-line, deepen |
/harding-cadence | Re-cadenced prose tuned by ear — beats, tempo, half-time/double-time, accents — matched to mood and character, angular and funky, with stray eighth notes cut and sing-song killed | Final line-level polish, or any voice/cadence work where rhythm must carry the feeling; a passage that reads flat, sing-song, or rhythmically off | /harding-two-things, word-rhythm, ward-saxon-punch, roth-visual-prose, voice-calibrate |
/harding-distill | An overworked or sprawling draft carved back to maximum density with maximum readability — nothing ornamental, all depths of field working — via the overwrite-then-chisel cycle, revision reframed as insurance not punishment | A draft is cluttered, overworked, or sprawling; revision is stalling because it feels like punishment; you need "depth not width" (800 pages deep in 200 pages wide) | /harding-improv-draft, compression-sprint, michael-connelly-rewrite, erosion, edit-article |
/harding-recognition-audit | A diagnostic + rewrite that strips stated lessons, takeaways, and explained feelings, then re-engineers the piece to persuade by recognition — opening a door (dilating the reader) rather than closing one | A piece lands a tidy takeaway or moral, explains how to feel, or reads as "good point, noted" rather than "somebody finally put that into words"; auditing any draft for the explanation-is-violence failure | /harding-two-things, anti-slop-audit, slop-check, depth-audit, really-real-writing |