| name | convert-checkout-page |
| slash_command | false |
| pack | business-conversion |
| family | page_builder |
| description | Author checkout-page micro-copy + trust signals: order summary, form-field copy, bump slot, button label, guarantee restatement, and friction-reduction patterns. Emits brief + paste-ready HTML/CSS scaffold (payment-processor-agnostic).
Use when the user needs a conversion-optimized checkout page where every word and visual signal earns its place.
Not for the bump component itself (see /convert bump) or post-purchase OTOs (see /convert oto-page).
|
| triggers | ["checkout page","order page","order form copy","checkout copy","convert checkout","cart page","buy form"] |
| negative_triggers | ["bump component","oto page","sales page","audit my checkout"] |
| tags | ["conversion","copy","page","donahoe-method","html","accessibility"] |
| priority | 85 |
| version | 1.0.0 |
| author | Wayland Business Pack |
| license | MIT |
| metadata | {"wayland":{"related_skills":["convert","convert-bump","convert-oto-page","convert-four-questions","convert-open","convert-three-locks","convert-proof","convert-close","convert-chute","convert-voice","convert-bullshit-filter"]}} |
| attribution | {"lineage":"The Donahoe Method (Wayland-owned operating system); references checkout-conversion canon, trust-signal placement literature, Cialdini commitment-and-consistency at the moment of purchase"} |
Convert Checkout Page - Checkout Micro-Copy + Trust Signals
"By the time they hit checkout, the heavy persuasion is done. The job here is friction reduction. Every doubt that creeps in between the buy button and the confirm button is a sale you already won and lost again. Micro-copy is the lever."
This skill builds the checkout-page surface: order summary, form-field copy, optional bump slot, button label, guarantee restatement, and the trust signals that close the gap between intent and confirm.
When to Use
Trigger phrases: checkout page, order page, order form copy, checkout copy, cart page, /convert checkout <product>.
Use when:
- The user has a sales page (or VSL page) that needs a checkout surface to land on.
- The checkout will be assembled from a payment processor (Stripe Checkout, ThriveCart, SamCart, custom). This skill emits the page chrome and copy - the form fields themselves usually come from the processor.
- The user wants to reduce checkout abandonment.
When NOT to Use
- The bump component itself →
/convert bump (this skill includes a slot for it).
- Post-purchase OTO →
/convert oto-page.
- Pre-purchase sales page →
/convert sales-page.
- Auditing existing checkout →
/convert audit.
Inputs
Required:
- Product + price + components - what's being bought.
- Payment processor - Stripe Checkout / ThriveCart / SamCart / custom. Determines what form fields you control vs. inherit.
- Guarantee terms - exact text.
- One person + the brand voice from the upstream sales page (voice continuity matters here).
- Bump (optional) - if a
/convert bump exists, this page reserves a slot for it.
Optional:
- Brand colors / logo.
- Trust badges / payment-method icons / SSL signal copy.
- Existing testimonial for sidebar reassurance block.
out_path - defaults via build_report_path.
Workflow - All Eight Method Phases (radically compressed; checkout is execution, not persuasion)
The checkout page is post-decision copy. The Method still applies, but every phase compresses to a sentence or a label.
Phase 0 - Four Questions (call convert-four-questions)
The buyer's current questions at the moment they hit checkout:
- Why You? - Already answered upstream.
- Why Me? - Already answered.
- Why This? - Already answered.
- Why Now? - "Should I really do this right now?" This is the only Question still alive at checkout, and it's the one micro-copy must address.
Phase 1 - Temperature
Boiling. Don't pitch. Confirm.
Phase 2 - Four-Layer Open (call convert-open)
A page-top reassurance line collapses Layers 1–3 into one sentence:
"You're seconds away from [the desired state]. Fill in the details below - I'll have your access ready before you finish your coffee."
Layer 4 (Fingerprint) lives in the voice consistency between this page and the sales page.
Phase 3 - Three Locks
- Want = the state, restated in one line at top.
- Trust = guarantee block + payment badges + (optional) one inline testimonial.
- Excuse = the guarantee. Restated next to the buy button - not at the bottom of the page where the eye doesn't reach.
Phase 4 - Bullets
3 bullets max in the order summary - what's included. Mostly Snapshot ("Module 1: ...", "Bonus: ...") for clarity, not curiosity.
Phase 5 - Proof
A single inline testimonial in a sidebar or below the form. Optional but high-leverage. One Anecdote / Receipt is enough; more distracts from form completion.
Phase 6 - Cascade Close
The buy button is the Door. Label it with Vision:
- ✗ "Submit" / "Pay now" / "Continue"
- ✓ "Get instant access" / "Lock in my spot" / "Start the program"
Phase 7 - Greased Chute
Eye flow: order summary → form fields → bump (optional) → guarantee + trust badges → buy button. No detours, no popups, no "are you sure?" interrupts.
Phase 8 - Voice + Bullshit Filter
The biggest filter test: "Does the voice on this page match the voice on the sales page?" Voice mismatch between sales page and checkout is one of the largest sources of cart abandonment - buyers feel like they're suddenly on a different site.
Section Architecture
| # | Section | Purpose |
|---|
| 1 | Top reassurance line | Open compressed |
| 2 | Order summary block (with edit option) | Want lock |
| 3 | Form fields (name, email, payment) | Friction layer |
| 4 | Bump slot (optional) | Bump from /convert bump |
| 5 | Guarantee restatement | Excuse lock |
| 6 | Buy button (Vision-labeled) | Door |
| 7 | Trust signals (badges, SSL, payment methods) | Trust lock |
| 8 | Inline testimonial (sidebar or below button) | Trust reinforcement |
| 9 | Footer: contact link + refund link + privacy | Friction reduction |
HTML/CSS Reference Implementation
<!doctype html>
<html lang="en">
<head>
<meta charset="utf-8">
<meta name="viewport" content="width=device-width, initial-scale=1">
<title>Checkout - {{PRODUCT_NAME}}</title>
<meta name="description" content="{{META_DESCRIPTION}}">
<meta property="og:title" content="Checkout - {{PRODUCT_NAME}}">
<meta property="og:type" content="website">
<style>
:root{--ink:#0e1116;--ink-soft:#3a3f47;--paper:#fbfaf6;--accent:#c0392b;--accent-ink:#fff;--rule:#e6e2d8;--max:920px}
*,*::before,*::after{box-sizing:border-box}
body{margin:0;font:17px/1.55 -apple-system,BlinkMacSystemFont,"Helvetica Neue",Arial,sans-serif;color:var(--ink);background:var(--paper)}
main{max-width:var(--max);margin:0 auto;padding:24px 20px 64px;display:grid;grid-template-columns:1fr;gap:24px}
@media(min-width:820px){main{grid-template-columns:1.2fr 1fr}}
h1{font-size:clamp(22px,3.8vw,28px);line-height:1.2;margin:0 0 14px}
h2{font-size:18px;margin:24px 0 10px}
p{margin:0 0 14px}
.reassure{background:#fff;border:1px solid var(--rule);padding:14px 16px;border-radius:8px;font-size:15px;color:var(--ink-soft)}
.summary{background:#fff;border:1px solid var(--rule);padding:18px;border-radius:8px}
.summary ul{list-style:none;padding:0;margin:0 0 14px}
.summary li{display:flex;justify-content:space-between;padding:6px 0;border-bottom:1px solid var(--rule);font-size:15px}
.summary li:last-child{border:0;font-weight:700;font-size:17px;padding-top:10px}
.form-card{background:#fff;border:1px solid var(--rule);padding:18px;border-radius:8px}
label{display:block;font-size:14px;font-weight:600;margin:10px 0 4px;color:var(--ink)}
input[type=text],input[type=email],input[type=tel]{width:100%;padding:12px 14px;font-size:16px;border:1px solid var(--rule);border-radius:6px;background:#fff;color:var(--ink)}
input:focus-visible{outline:3px solid var(--accent);outline-offset:1px}
.guarantee{margin-top:16px;padding:14px 16px;background:#fff8d8;border:1px dashed #e2c34a;border-radius:8px;font-size:14px;color:#1a1408}
button.cta{width:100%;padding:18px 20px;background:var(--accent);color:var(--accent-ink);border:0;border-radius:6px;font-size:18px;font-weight:700;cursor:pointer;margin-top:14px}
button.cta:focus-visible{outline:3px solid var(--ink);outline-offset:3px}
.badges{display:flex;gap:10px;align-items:center;flex-wrap:wrap;margin-top:14px;font-size:13px;color:var(--ink-soft)}
.badges span{padding:4px 8px;border:1px solid var(--rule);border-radius:4px;background:#fff}
.testimonial{margin-top:18px;padding:14px 16px;background:#fff;border-left:4px solid var(--accent);font-size:15px}
.testimonial figcaption{font-size:13px;color:var(--ink-soft);margin-top:6px}
footer{grid-column:1/-1;margin-top:24px;font-size:13px;color:var(--ink-soft);text-align:center;border-top:1px solid var(--rule);padding-top:14px}
footer a{color:var(--ink-soft);margin:0 8px}
@media (prefers-reduced-motion: reduce){html{scroll-behavior:auto}}
</style>
</head>
<body>
<main>
<section>
<p class="reassure">{{TOP_REASSURANCE_LINE_VISION_FRAMED}}</p>
<h1>{{CHECKOUT_HEADLINE}}</h1>
<div class="form-card">
<form action="{{PAYMENT_PROCESSOR_ENDPOINT}}" method="post" novalidate>
<h2>Your details</h2>
<label for="name">Full name</label>
<input id="name" type="text" name="name" autocomplete="name" required aria-required="true">
<label for="email">Email <span style="font-weight:400;color:var(--ink-soft)">(where we'll send your access)</span></label>
<input id="email" type="email" name="email" autocomplete="email" required aria-required="true">
<h2>Payment</h2>
<div id="payment-element" aria-label="Payment details">{{PAYMENT_PROCESSOR_ELEMENT}}</div>
{{BUMP_SLOT_OR_EMPTY}}
<div class="guarantee">{{GUARANTEE_RESTATEMENT_NEXT_TO_BUTTON}}</div>
<button class="cta" type="submit" aria-label="{{CTA_ARIA}}">{{CTA_VISION_LABEL}}</button>
<div class="badges" aria-label="Trust signals">
<span>SSL secured</span>
<span>Visa</span>
<span>Mastercard</span>
<span>Amex</span>
<span>{{REGION_PAYMENT_METHOD}}</span>
</div>
</form>
</div>
</section>
<aside>
<div class="summary" aria-label="Order summary">
<h2 style="margin-top:0">Order summary</h2>
<ul>
<li><span>{{COMPONENT_1}}</span><span>{{C1_PRICE}}</span></li>
<li><span>{{COMPONENT_2}}</span><span>{{C2_PRICE}}</span></li>
<li><span>{{COMPONENT_3}}</span><span>{{C3_PRICE}}</span></li>
<li><span>Total today</span><span>{{TOTAL}}</span></li>
</ul>
<p style="font-size:13px;color:var(--ink-soft);margin:0">{{BILLING_NOTE_E_G_BILLED_ONCE_NO_RECURRING}}</p>
</div>
<figure class="testimonial">
<blockquote>{{ONE_INLINE_TESTIMONIAL_ANECDOTE_OR_RECEIPT}}</blockquote>
<figcaption>{{NAMECHECK}}</figcaption>
</figure>
</aside>
<footer>
<a href="{{CONTACT_URL}}">Contact</a> ·
<a href="{{REFUND_URL}}">Refund policy</a> ·
<a href="{{PRIVACY_URL}}">Privacy</a>
</footer>
</main>
</body>
</html>
CSS notes:
- Two-column layout on desktop (form left, summary right) with single-column collapse on mobile. Order summary above form on mobile because thumb-zone first impression matters.
- The guarantee box uses the same yellow/dashed pattern as the bump and webinar attendance bonus - consistent visual language for "this is additional and easy."
- Trust badges in plain text/border boxes. Avoid logos that look like clipart; trust badges that look fake hurt more than they help.
- The button is full-width at the bottom of the form so the eye lands there after every field. Single primary action.
- Email field has a tiny clarification ("where we'll send your access") - micro-copy that prevents typos and reduces "did it work?" support tickets.
Output Template
# Checkout Page - {{PRODUCT}}
**Product:** {{PRODUCT}} - {{PRICE}}
**Components:** {{LIST}}
**Guarantee:** {{TERMS}}
**Bump slot:** {{IF_PRESENT_OR_NONE}}
**Payment processor:** {{NAME}}
## Phase 0–8 (compressed)
- Four Questions: only "Why Now" is live; addressed by reassurance line + guarantee placement
- Open: 1-line top reassurance
- Locks: Want (restated up top) / Trust (guarantee + badges + testimonial) / Excuse (guarantee next to button)
- Bullets: 3 in order summary
- Cascade Close: button label is Door (Vision-framed)
- Voice Rules applied (matches upstream sales page); Bullshit Filter is a separate downstream pass
## Final copy
- Top reassurance line: "{{LINE}}"
- Checkout headline: "{{H1}}"
- Field micro-copy: name = "{{LABEL}}", email = "{{LABEL}} ({{HINT}})"
- Guarantee restatement: "{{LINE}}"
- Buy button label: "{{CTA}}"
- Order summary lines: {{LIST}}
- Billing note: "{{LINE}}"
- Inline testimonial: "{{P}}" - {{NAMECHECK}}
- Trust badges: {{LIST}}
- Footer links: contact / refund / privacy
## HTML reference
{{HTML_BLOCK}}
## Method coverage report
Method coverage report:
Open: not applicable - checkout is post-decision; no Layer-1 Nerve Strike needed. 1-line top reassurance carries voice continuity (Layer 4 only)
Three Locks: maintained - Want restated up top; Trust signals (guarantee + badges + testimonial) reinforce Trust lock; price stack and guarantee-next-to-button reinforce Excuse
Proof: partial - 1 inline testimonial + trust badges; full proof block lives upstream on the sales page
Bullets: not applicable - order-summary line items only; the bullet block as a system not used at this surface
Cascade Close: compressed - Door = the purchase button (Vision-labeled); Stack via order summary; Safety Net via guarantee microcopy; Math omitted (price already decided upstream); P.S./P.P.S. omitted
Greased Chute: full - summary → form → bump → guarantee → button → badges; thumb-zone optimized on mobile
Voice Rules: full - voice matches upstream sales page; no marketing-speak on every label, button, error message
Temperature: Boiling (post-decision, mid-purchase)
Friction: no popups, no interrupts, no "are you sure?" - every interrupt costs conversions
Required next step: Run /convert bullshit-filter on this draft before shipping - checkout microcopy fails are the most expensive voice fails in the funnel.
The Filter is a SEPARATE pass - this skill cannot grade its own output.
## Notes / Cross-Skill Composition
- The checkout page's voice MUST match the upstream sales page's voice. If a buyer feels they're suddenly on a different site, abandonment spikes. Use the same headline patterns, the same trust language, the same color accents.
- For the bump slot, drop in the component from `/convert bump`. Don't generate two competing bumps on the same page.
- The post-checkout flow should land on `/convert oto-page` (immediate upgrade), then optionally `/convert downsell-page`, then `/convert thank-you-page`.
- If a payment processor (Stripe Checkout, Paddle) hosts its own form, this skill emits the *pre-checkout* page chrome with the buy button that redirects there - same Method, slightly different surface.
- Mobile checkout is where most carts die. Test on a real phone, not the desktop emulator. Thumb-zone the button.
## Lineage
- Checkout-conversion / cart-abandonment canon - direct-response info-marketing playbook.
- Trust-signal placement - UX research literature on perceived security cues.
- Commitment-and-consistency at the moment of purchase - Cialdini (Influence, 1984).
- The Method itself - Wayland-owned operating system.
