lyric-diagnostic

name	lyric-diagnostic
description	Diagnose lyric problems across prosody, rhyme, meaning, register, sound, and structure. Use when AI-generated or human lyrics feel flat, cliched, awkward, or mismatched.
license	MIT
metadata	{"author":"jwynia","version":"1.0"}

Lyric Diagnostic: Skill

You diagnose lyric problems across multiple dimensions. Your role is to identify why lyrics fail and guide writers (human or AI) toward more effective choices.

Core Principle

Lyrics fail in predictable, diagnosable ways. Generic is not neutral—generic is bad.

AI-generated lyrics cluster at statistical distribution centers: the most probable word choices, rhyme pairs, and emotional vocabulary. Probability optimization produces mediocrity. Effective lyrics require intentional deviation from defaults.

The same pattern that makes "Celtic" trigger tinwhistle in music generation makes "love" trigger predictable rhyme pairs and emotional cliches in lyric generation.

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The Lyric States

State LY1: Cliche Trap

Symptoms: Predictable rhyme pairs dominate. Word choices are first-associations. Nothing surprises. Lyrics could fit any song on this topic.

Key Questions:

• What rhyme pairs are you using? Are they first-associations?
• Would replacing the end-rhyme word break the meaning? (If not, it's filler)
• Can you enumerate the default words for this topic and avoid them?
• What would a different genre use for this same emotion?

Diagnostic Checklist:

• No Tier 1 cliche words (love, heart, baby, forever)
• No stock phrases (see list below)
• Rhyme pairs are not obvious first-associations
• At least one surprising word choice per verse
• Specific details rather than generic statements

Stock Phrases (phrase-level cliches, not just words):

Scripts can't catch these—they require semantic judgment:

Phrase	Category	Why It's Cliche
"screaming inside"	unexpressed anguish	Every song about hidden pain uses this
"need you gone"	direct desire	States want instead of showing it
"won't leave me alone"	persistence	Generic memory/thought complaint
"thought I died"	emotional death metaphor	Overused intensity marker
"used to be" + past state	nostalgia setup	Stock before/after framing
"look in your eyes"	connection	Vague romantic gesture
"torn apart"	destruction	Abstract violence metaphor
"can't let go"	attachment	States the problem directly

Lazy Rhyme Pairs (rhyme drove word choice):

Pair	Problem
desire / fire / tired	Cluster appears together constantly
inside / died / alive	Death-interior cluster
away / stay / day	Motion-time cluster
heart / apart / start	Heart-destruction cluster
alone / gone / on	Isolation cluster

Interventions:

• Run cliche-check.ts as pre-filter (surfaces candidates, doesn't diagnose)
• Scan for stock phrases manually—scripts miss these
• List the 10 most predictable rhymes for your end words—avoid them all
• Replace abstract emotions with concrete sensory imagery
• Ask: "What would someone who hates this genre never say?" Use that.

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State LY2: Meter Mismatch

Symptoms: Lines don't fit the melody. Stresses fall on wrong syllables. Unnatural pronunciation required. Syllables crammed or stretched awkwardly.

Key Questions:

• Can you tap the rhythm and speak the line simultaneously?
• Where do stresses fall? Do they match the melody's emphasis?
• Are any syllables swallowed or stretched unnaturally?
• How many syllables per phrase? Is there consistency?

Diagnostic Checklist:

• Natural word stress aligns with musical beats
• Syllable counts fit the melodic phrase
• No awkward pronunciations required
• Contractions/elisions are singable

Interventions:

• Run meter-check.ts to analyze syllable counts and stress patterns
• Speak the lyrics while tapping the beat—mismatches become obvious
• Swap words with same meaning but different syllable count
• Use contractions to reduce syllables, or expand to add them

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State LY3: Shallow Surface

Symptoms: Lyrics say exactly what they mean and nothing more. No subtext, no layers, no depth. Emotions are stated directly. Everything is on the surface.

Key Questions:

• Is there a second reading? Something between the lines?
• Are you stating the emotion or evoking it through imagery?
• What specific concrete image grounds the abstraction?
• Could this be understood on first listen but reveal depth on repeat?

Diagnostic Checklist:

• At least one image per verse that works on multiple levels
• Emotions evoked through detail, not stated directly
• Something for repeat listens to discover
• Concrete specifics anchor abstract concepts

Interventions:

• For every abstract statement, find a concrete action/image that embodies it
• Instead of "I'm sad," show what sad looks like, sounds like, feels like
• Add a detail that doesn't quite fit—creates productive ambiguity
• Test: can you explain two different interpretations of the same line?

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State LY4: Register Mismatch

Symptoms: Lyric tone contradicts the music's emotion. Casual words over dramatic instrumentation. Heavy lyrics over light music. Vocabulary doesn't match genre expectations.

Key Questions:

• What emotion should the listener feel at this moment?
• Is your vocabulary elevated/casual matching the music?
• Does the distance (intimate/observational) match the instrumental?
• Would this language make sense in this genre?

Diagnostic Checklist:

• Vocabulary matches musical intensity
• Distance (I/you vs. they/we) fits the sound
• Genre vocabulary expectations met or intentionally broken
• Irony (if present) is signaled clearly

Interventions:

• Listen to the music without lyrics—what emotions does it evoke?
• Match lyric intensity to musical intensity section by section
• Check genre vocabulary norms—violate intentionally or not at all
• If using irony, add signal words or structural cues

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State LY5: Sound Neglect

Symptoms: No attention to how words feel in the mouth. Harsh consonant clusters at tender moments. Monotonous vowel sounds. No alliteration, assonance, or deliberate sound texture.

Key Questions:

• What consonant sounds dominate? What texture do they create?
• Do vowel sounds support the emotional content?
• Are there harsh clusters that disrupt flow?
• Is there intentional sound painting?

Diagnostic Checklist:

• Soft consonants (l, m, n, w) at intimate moments
• Hard consonants (k, t, p) at impactful moments
• Vowel sounds support emotional content
• At least one sound device per verse (alliteration, assonance)

Interventions:

• Read lyrics aloud focusing only on how they feel in the mouth
• Map emotional moments to appropriate sound textures
• Replace harsh-sounding words at tender moments
• Add deliberate alliteration or assonance at key phrases

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State LY6: Structural Chaos

Symptoms: No identifiable hook. Verse and chorus feel interchangeable. Repetition is annoying, not reinforcing. Bridge doesn't contrast. Song has no arc.

Key Questions:

• Is there a clear hook? Where does it land?
• Does each verse add new information or repeat?
• Does the bridge actually contrast or just continue?
• Is repetition earning its place?

Diagnostic Checklist:

• Hook is identifiable and memorable
• Verses differentiate (new info, different angle)
• Chorus delivers emotional payoff
• Bridge provides contrast or escalation
• Repetition evolves or emphasizes, doesn't bore

Structural Cliches:

Pattern	Problem	Fix
Bridge = Verse	Not a bridge at all—just more of the same	Shift perspective, time, or speaker
Chorus expands on repeat	Adding lines without development	Each chorus iteration should mean more
Hook repeated without exploration	Says the phrase but never unpacks it	What does the hook mean? Show us.
No arc	Emotional state same at end as beginning	Something must change—realization, acceptance, escalation
Verses say same thing differently	Verse 2 is Verse 1 with synonyms	Each verse needs new information or angle

Interventions:

• Identify the hook—if you can't, create one
• Make each verse answer a different question about the topic
• Bridge should shift perspective, time, or intensity
• Cut repetition that doesn't earn its place
• Check: is the speaker in a different place emotionally at the end?

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Diagnostic Process

Step 1: First Listen (Holistic)

Listen without analyzing. Note:

• What's the overall impression?
• What lines feel strong or weak?
• Where does attention wander?
• What's memorable after one pass?

Step 2: Identify Primary State

Which of the six states best describes the main problem?

• LY1: Feels generic/predictable → Cliche Trap
• LY2: Doesn't fit the melody → Meter Mismatch
• LY3: Says nothing deep → Shallow Surface
• LY4: Tone feels wrong → Register Mismatch
• LY5: Sounds awkward → Sound Neglect
• LY6: No structure/hook → Structural Chaos

Step 3: Run Diagnostics

For the primary state:

• Answer the key questions
• Run relevant scripts (cliche-check.ts, meter-check.ts, etc.)
• Complete the diagnostic checklist

Step 4: Check Secondary States

Often multiple states co-occur:

• Cliche (LY1) often comes with Shallow (LY3)
• Meter (LY2) often comes with Sound (LY5)
• Register (LY4) often comes with Structure (LY6)

Step 5: Prioritized Intervention

Fix the most damaging issue first:

• Meter (LY2) before Sound (LY5)—if it's unsingable, sound texture won't help
• Cliche (LY1) before Shallow (LY3)—fresh words enable depth
• Structure (LY6) before Register (LY4)—need sections before matching tone

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Anti-Patterns

1. Over-Revision

Pattern: Fixing one problem introduces new problems. Every change cascades.

Signs:

• Draft 5 is worse than draft 2
• "Fixing" rhyme breaks meaning
• Original spark is lost

Why It Fails: Lyrics are an interconnected system. Point fixes ignore system effects.

Fix: Make one change, then re-read holistically. Don't chain fixes without checking the whole.

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2. False Sophistication

Pattern: Chasing complexity for its own sake. Obscurity mistaken for depth.

Signs:

• Lyrics need explanation
• Dense metaphor without clear thread
• Audience confusion, not intrigue

Why It Fails: Obscure isn't deep. Listeners need access point.

Fix: Every obscure element needs a clear anchor. Complexity serves clarity, not replaces it.

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3. Genre Cosplay

Pattern: Adopting genre vocabulary without understanding function.

Signs:

• Country lyrics with trucks but no storytelling
• Hip-hop wordplay without flow
• Indie obscurity without emotional core

Why It Fails: Genre vocabulary is shortcut to function. Without function, it's costume.

Fix: Understand what the genre element does, then deploy it for that purpose.

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4. First-Draft Attachment

Pattern: Refusing to revise lines that came easily.

Signs:

• "But that's what I wrote first"
• Defending weak lines emotionally
• Unable to kill darlings

Why It Fails: First drafts capture intuition but include noise. Signal needs extraction.

Fix: Save first draft separately. Revise as if someone else wrote it.

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Integration

Inbound (when to use this skill)

• After generating AI lyrics (Suno, etc.)
• When human-written lyrics feel "off"
• Before finalizing any lyrics for production

Outbound (what to do after)

• LY1 (Cliche) → Apply Cliche Transcendence framework
• LY2 (Meter) → Use meter-reference.md for alternatives
• LY3 (Shallow) → Use Semantic Layers from lyric-analysis-framework.md
• LY4 (Register) → Check lyricist-dna-framework.md for register models
• LY5 (Sound) → Use Sound Texture section of lyric-analysis-framework.md
• LY6 (Structure) → Use Structural Architecture section

Complementary

• prose-style - for sentence-level craft (overlaps with sound/clarity)
• cliche-transcendence - for escaping default patterns
• naming - for sound symbolism and word selection

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AI Lyric Generation Failure Modes

AI-generated lyrics (Suno, etc.) fail in predictable ways due to how LLMs work:

The Degradation Pattern

1. Lines 1-2: Model has freedom, may find something interesting
2. Lines 3+: Rhyme constraint activates, model optimizes for completion over originality
3. By verse 2: Fully in statistical default mode—stock phrases, lazy rhyme clusters

Why this happens:

Two forces compound:

1. Statistical median pull: LLMs generate the most probable next token. For lyrics, this means the most common rhyme pairs, the most frequent emotional vocabulary, the most typical phrase structures. Probability optimization produces mediocrity.

2. Completion reward bias: Training for "helpful" weights goal completion over thoroughness or quality. The model treats "rhyme achieved" as success, regardless of whether it's an interesting rhyme. Structure complete > structure meaningful.

This is the same mechanism documented in the Sequential Focus framework—forward reference gravitational pull. The model sees the target (rhyme, line end, verse completion) and races toward the most probable path rather than exploring alternatives.

Observable Symptoms

• Opening verse shows craft, later verses collapse into cliche
• Rhyme words cluster in predictable groups (fire/desire/tired appears together)
• Stock phrases concentrate in verses 2+
• Bridge is often weakest section (furthest from opening, most constrained)

Countermeasures

Pre-anchor end words: Write the rhyme words yourself with intentional non-cluster choices. Force the model to land on words without lazy partners. If you avoid "fire," you break the fire/desire/tired cluster.

Seed with concrete imagery: Opening lines set the vocabulary space. Concrete, unusual imagery early may hold off statistical collapse longer than abstract emotional vocabulary.

Isolate sections: Generate verse 1 alone, evaluate, then generate verse 2 with explicit instruction to avoid verse 1's rhyme families. Treat each section as a separate generation task.

Blacklist clusters: Explicitly forbid the lazy rhyme clusters in prompts:

• "Do not use: fire, desire, tired, higher, liar"
• "Do not use: inside, died, alive, hide, tried"
• "Do not use: heart, apart, start, part"

Provide slant rhyme alternatives: Give the model escape routes. "Instead of perfect rhymes, use slant rhymes like home/come, love/move."

The Isolation Principle

The same principle that makes Sequential Focus work for agent tasks applies to lyric generation: hide the end goal, make each phase complete.

Don't prompt "write a complete song about X." Instead:

1. Generate hook/title concepts (no full lyrics)
2. Generate verse 1 alone (no chorus yet)
3. Generate chorus treating verse 1 as context
4. Generate verse 2 with explicit differentiation requirement
5. Generate bridge with perspective shift requirement

Each step is the complete mission. The model can't race to "song complete" if it doesn't know a song is the goal.

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What This Skill Does NOT Do

• Does not write lyrics for you (diagnostic only)
• Does not evaluate musical elements (use Musical DNA for that)
• Does not replace human judgment about artistic intent
• Does not guarantee commercial success (craft ≠ commerce)

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Scripts (Pre-Filters, Not Diagnostics)

These scripts surface candidates for LLM/human interpretation. They do NOT make diagnostic judgments. Use their output as input to your analysis, not as the analysis itself.

Why pre-filters?

• Word lists can't catch stock phrases ("screaming inside")
• Phoneme matching can't judge rhyme quality (gerund-gerund is lazy)
• Syllable counting works, but variance meaning requires interpretation

cliche-check.ts

Surfaces Tier 1/2 terms from lyric-dominance-rules.json. You must evaluate in context.

Usage: bun run scripts/cliche-check.ts "your lyrics here"

Limitations: Misses stock phrases, rhyme-driven word choice, semantic cliche.

meter-check.ts

Reports syllable counts, stress patterns, and variance. You must judge if variance is intentional.

Usage: bun run scripts/meter-check.ts "your lyrics here"

Useful for: Identifying lines that need review, spotting high variance.

rhyme-check.ts

Maps rhyme scheme and identifies rhyme types. You must evaluate rhyme quality.

Usage: bun run scripts/rhyme-check.ts "your lyrics here"

Limitations: Marks gerund-gerund (-ing/-ing) as rhymes. Marks same-semantic-field pairs as rhymes. Doesn't detect rhyme-forced word choice.

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Quick Reference

State	Core Problem	First Question	Primary Fix
LY1	Predictable	Are rhymes first-associations?	Replace cliche terms
LY2	Unsingable	Do stresses match beats?	Count syllables, swap words
LY3	Empty	Is there subtext?	Add concrete imagery
LY4	Mismatched	Does tone match music?	Align vocabulary to intensity
LY5	Harsh	How do words feel in mouth?	Map sounds to emotions
LY6	Aimless	Where's the hook?	Define and place hook