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| description | Use when writing behavior analytic manuscripts for journal publication, including APA formatting, JABA-style structure, precise behavioral language, and reporting single-subject research results. |
Academic Writing for Behavior Analysis
Writing for behavior analytic journals requires precise behavioral language, rigorous adherence to APA formatting, and specific conventions for reporting single-subject research. This skill covers manuscript preparation for JABA, BAP, and related journals.
APA 7th Edition Essentials for ABA Papers
General Formatting
- Font: 12-point Times New Roman, Calibri 11pt, or Arial 11pt.
- Margins: 1 inch on all sides.
- Spacing: Double-spaced throughout, including references and figure captions.
- Page numbers: Top right corner on every page.
- Running head: Shortened title (50 characters max) at top left of every page.
Heading Levels
- Level 1: Centered, Bold, Title Case (e.g., Method)
- Level 2: Left-aligned, Bold, Title Case (e.g., Participants and Setting)
- Level 3: Left-aligned, Bold Italic, Title Case (e.g., Interobserver Agreement)
- Most ABA papers use Levels 1–3. Deeper nesting is rarely needed.
In-Text Citations
- One author: (Smith, 2020)
- Two authors: (Smith & Jones, 2020)
- Three or more: (Smith et al., 2020) — from the first citation onward in APA 7th.
- Narrative: Smith et al. (2020) demonstrated that...
Reference List
JABA Manuscript Structure
Title Page
- Full title: concise, informative, includes the IV and DV.
- Author names and institutional affiliations.
- Author note with ORCID, correspondence address, and disclosures.
- Example title: "Effects of Functional Communication Training on Aggression During Academic Tasks for Children With Autism"
Abstract
- 150–250 words (check journal-specific limits).
- Structured or unstructured depending on journal requirements.
- Include: purpose, participants, design, primary findings, and implications.
- Keywords: 3–5 terms below the abstract.
Introduction
- Opening paragraph: Establish the clinical or applied significance of the topic.
- Literature review: Concise synthesis of relevant prior research.
- Rationale: Identify the gap and explain how this study addresses it.
- Purpose statement: Clear statement of what this study will examine.
- Do not over-review—JABA introductions are typically 3–5 pages.
Method
Participants and Setting
- Describe each participant: age, gender, diagnosis, relevant skills, relevant history.
- Describe the setting: physical environment, materials, staffing.
- Use pseudonyms. Never use real names or identifiable information.
Materials
- Assessment tools, intervention materials, data collection systems.
Response Measurement and IOA
- Operational definitions of all dependent variables.
- Measurement procedures.
- IOA method, percentage of sessions assessed, mean and range.
Experimental Design
- Name and describe the specific single-subject design.
- Justify design selection briefly.
Procedure
- Baseline: Describe exactly what occurred during baseline.
- Intervention: Describe each component with replication precision.
- Additional phases: Maintenance, generalization, follow-up.
Treatment Integrity
- Describe the integrity checklist.
- Report percentage of sessions assessed, mean integrity, and range.
Results
- Organize by dependent variable or by participant, depending on the design.
- Describe the visual analysis systematically:
- Within-condition: level, trend, variability for each phase.
- Between-condition: change in level, change in trend, immediacy, overlap.
- Report specific data: "During baseline, aggression occurred at a mean rate of 4.2 responses per minute (range: 2.8–5.6). Following introduction of FCT, aggression decreased to a mean of 0.3 responses per minute (range: 0–0.8)."
- Reference figures: "Figure 1 displays the frequency of aggression across all phases for each participant."
- Report effect sizes if calculated.
- Report social validity data.
Discussion
- Summary of findings: Brief restatement of primary results.
- Relation to prior literature: How do findings compare to existing studies?
- Clinical implications: What do results mean for practitioners?
- Limitations: Be honest and specific. Every study has limitations.
- Future directions: What should be studied next?
- Keep discussion proportional to results—typically 3–5 pages.
Writing Style for Behavior Analysis
Use Precise Behavioral Language
- Say "reinforcement" not "reward."
- Say "contingency" not "consequence system."
- Say "discriminative stimulus" not "cue" or "trigger" (unless defining for a lay audience).
- Say "establishing operation" or "motivating operation" not "drive" or "need."
- Say "response" or "behavior" not "action" or "choice" (when describing operant behavior).
Avoid Mentalistic Explanations
Behavior analysts describe behavior in terms of environmental variables, not internal states.
| Avoid | Use Instead |
|---|
| "The child wanted attention" | "Aggression was maintained by social positive reinforcement (attention)" |
| "She felt frustrated" | "Problem behavior increased during high-demand conditions" |
| "He chose to cooperate" | "Compliance occurred on 90% of trials" |
| "The student was motivated" | "The establishing operation for the reinforcer was in effect" |
Be Specific, Not Vague
| Vague | Specific |
|---|
| "The intervention was effective" | "Aggression decreased from a mean of 5.2 to 0.4 per session" |
| "Participants made progress" | "All three participants met the mastery criterion within 15 sessions" |
| "Results were mixed" | "Two of three participants showed decreases greater than 80%; the third showed a 40% decrease" |
Reporting Single-Subject Results
Describing Visual Analysis in Text
Follow a systematic format for each participant:
- Baseline description: level, trend, variability.
- Intervention introduction: immediacy of change, direction of change.
- Intervention data: level, trend, variability.
- Replications: describe the pattern across reversals or tiers.
- Summary statement about functional relationship.
Presenting Graphs
- Line graphs are standard for single-subject data.
- Each participant or tier gets a separate panel (stacked vertically for multiple baseline).
- Phase change lines: solid vertical lines.
- Data paths: connected within phases, not across phase lines.
- Axis labels: clear, with units of measurement.
- Legends: only if multiple data series are on one panel.
- Follow JABA graph formatting guidelines precisely.
Reporting IOA and Integrity
Present in the Method section with specific numbers:
"Interobserver agreement was assessed during 33% of sessions across all conditions. Agreement was calculated using trial-by-trial IOA. Mean agreement was 96% (range: 90%–100%). Treatment integrity was assessed on 30% of sessions. Mean integrity was 94% (range: 88%–100%)."
Common Reviewer Concerns
| Concern | How to Address |
|---|
| Insufficient replication | Ensure 3+ demonstrations of effect at 3+ time points |
| Baseline instability | Extend baseline until stable or counter-therapeutic trend |
| Missing IOA or integrity data | Assess on 20–33% of sessions across all conditions |
| Generalizability | Include generalization probes; discuss limitations honestly |
| Social validity not assessed | Include consumer satisfaction or clinical significance measures |
| Unclear operational definitions | Provide examples/non-examples; test with IOA |
| Magnitude of effect unclear | Report quantitative effect sizes alongside visual analysis |
Writing for BAP
BAP emphasizes practitioner relevance with a shorter format:
- Total manuscript: 15–25 pages including references.
- More emphasis on clinical implications and how-to guidance.
- Still requires rigorous methodology if presenting data.
- Practice-focused reviews, tutorials, and clinical demonstrations are welcomed.
Submitting to Journals
Cover Letter
- Address the editor by name.
- State the manuscript title and that it is being submitted for consideration.
- Briefly describe the study's significance and fit with the journal.
- Confirm that the manuscript is original, not under review elsewhere, and all authors approved submission.
Responding to Reviews
- Respond to every comment, even if you disagree.
- Organize your response point-by-point, mirroring the reviewer's structure.
- When you agree: describe what you changed and where.
- When you disagree: provide a respectful, evidence-based rationale.
- Make it easy for the editor: be clear, concise, and specific.
Key References
- American Psychological Association. (2020). Publication Manual of the American Psychological Association (7th ed.).
- Journal of Applied Behavior Analysis. (n.d.). Author guidelines. https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/journal/19383703
- Bailey, J. S., & Burch, M. R. (2017). Research Methods in Applied Behavior Analysis (2nd ed.). Routledge.
