| name | iros-writing-style |
| description | Use when revising an IROS paper for a task-first opening, an integrated-system narrative, the references-counted-in page budget with no supplementary PDF, double-anonymous wording, demo-speak-to-numbers rewrites, and figure-first structure that carries the argument in the body for embodied-systems reviewers. |
IROS Writing Style
Use this when revising the main paper. An IROS paper has to make a reviewer picture the robot, the task,
and the physical constraint quickly, then trust that the system runs — all inside a page budget that
counts references and offers no appendix escape hatch.
Revision rules
- Open with the robot task and the embodiment constraint, not with "robots are increasingly
important." The first paragraph should name the platform, the task, and what makes it physically hard.
- Present the contribution as an integrated system: name the sensors, the interfaces between
components, and the compute/latency budget, so the pipeline is reconstructable from the body.
- Treat the body as the whole paper — IROS has no supplementary PDF. Anything load-bearing (metric
definition, protocol, key ablation) lives in the main text or it does not exist for the reviewer.
- Budget references as content; they count against the page limit, so a bloated bibliography costs
real space.
- Convert demo-speak to numbers: "works robustly" becomes a trial count with a success interval and
a failure taxonomy.
- Keep double-anonymous wording clean in self-citations, prior-platform references, acknowledgements,
and figure/video captions.
Figure-first discipline
- Robotics reviewers read figures before prose; a system diagram and a results figure should convey the
contribution before a word is read.
- Make the hero figure a system diagram with real interfaces, not a clip-art robot — show what
senses what and what commands what.
- Every plot of contact force, trajectory error, or success rate needs axis units and a stated trial
count in the caption; a curve without n is decoration.
- Prefer vector figures: reviewers zoom into force and trajectory plots, and rasterized exports blur at
400%.
Sentence-level rewrites
| Draft pattern | IROS-safe rewrite |
|---|
| "Our system robustly opens doors." | "Succeeds on 108/120 trials across 15 unseen doors (Wilson 95% CI ...)." |
| "Real-time performance." | "Runs the full loop at 18 Hz within a 30 W onboard budget." |
| "Outperforms the baseline." | "Reduces trajectory error by X on the same platform and route." |
| "Works in the real world." | "Sim-to-real gap of Y points; failures categorized in Table II." |
Vignette: compressing into the page budget
A draft with a sprawling related-work section, six figures, and a full appendix of derivations: keep the
system diagram and the two decision-critical results figures, fold related work into per-system
contrasts, and inline only the equations the reviewer must see — the rest is cut, not deferred, because
there is no appendix PDF. The test of a good cut: a reviewer reconstructs the system and believes the
evidence from the body alone.
First-page checklist:
[ ] robot + task + physical constraint stated in the first paragraph
[ ] system diagram with real sensor/actuator interfaces as the hero figure
[ ] each claim carries a number (Hz, watts, trials, error, gap)
[ ] references budgeted inside the page limit
[ ] no dependence on a non-existent supplement
[ ] anonymity clean in text, figures, and video captions
Output format
[Writing diagnosis] task-clear / demo-speak / system-vague / over-budget
[First-page fix] <new task-and-constraint opening>
[Claim discipline] <claim -> number/figure/trial>
[Compression cuts] <cut, not deferred — no appendix>
[Anonymity edits] <phrases/figures/video to fix>
